Lyrics (goth, song, Hang)

Trauma · 11-25-2007, 10:03 PM

Are we acquainted, Romeo?
My name is Riddle, but I usually go by Rhetoric
Today I drew an infinity sign and it resembled a fortune cookie
What do you see in me that I can't?

-Jake V.

~~CAPTAIN CAVEMAN~~ · 11-25-2007, 10:09 PM

I like it, except for the first line - it's not bad; I don't know, just odd, I suppose.

It's nice, though.

TheCaster · 11-27-2007, 12:54 PM

wee bit short for a song... but its good stuff

Trauma · 11-27-2007, 11:25 PM

Thanks guys.

Dr_Rez · 11-27-2007, 11:47 PM

Yea good, but first lines odd.

Trauma · 11-28-2007, 12:30 AM

Changed.
Does it sound a little better now?

11-25-2007, 10:03 PM	#1 (permalink)
Trauma snickers Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: detroit Posts: 2,194	Lyrics Are we acquainted, Romeo? My name is Riddle, but I usually go by Rhetoric Today I drew an infinity sign and it resembled a fortune cookie What do you see in me that I can't? -Jake V. __________________ A mi no me importa nada Para mi la vida es un sueño Last edited by Trauma; 11-28-2007 at 12:27 AM.

11-27-2007, 11:25 PM	#4 (permalink)
Trauma snickers Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: detroit Posts: 2,194	Thanks guys. __________________ A mi no me importa nada Para mi la vida es un sueño

11-27-2007, 11:47 PM	#5 (permalink)
Dr_Rez Registered Jimmy Rustler Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: USA Posts: 5,360	Yea good, but first lines odd. __________________ Best chance of losing virginity is in prison crew Always Checks Credentials Crew nba > nfl crew Shave one of my legs to pretend its a girl in my bed crew

11-28-2007, 12:30 AM	#6 (permalink)
Trauma snickers Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: detroit Posts: 2,194	Changed. Does it sound a little better now? __________________ A mi no me importa nada Para mi la vida es un sueño

11-25-2007, 10:09 PM	#2 (permalink)
~~CAPTAIN CAVEMAN~~ Account Disabled Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: VAN Posts: 2,530	I like it, except for the first line - it's not bad; I don't know, just odd, I suppose. It's nice, though.

11-27-2007, 12:54 PM	#3 (permalink)
TheCaster Music Rapist Join Date: Nov 2007 Location: Somewhere in the U.S Posts: 400	wee bit short for a song... but its good stuff