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Trauma 11-25-2007 09:03 PM
Lyrics
 
Are we acquainted, Romeo?
My name is Riddle, but I usually go by Rhetoric
Today I drew an infinity sign and it resembled a fortune cookie
What do you see in me that I can't?




-Jake V.

CAPTAIN CAVEMAN 11-25-2007 09:09 PM
I like it, except for the first line - it's not bad; I don't know, just odd, I suppose.

It's nice, though.

TheCaster 11-27-2007 11:54 AM
wee bit short for a song... but its good stuff

Trauma 11-27-2007 10:25 PM
Thanks guys.

Dr_Rez 11-27-2007 10:47 PM
Yea good, but first lines odd.

Trauma 11-27-2007 11:30 PM
Changed.
Does it sound a little better now?


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