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Dr_Rez · 12-14-2008, 11:24 PM

I have uploaded the sample I made that my band will try to turn into a song tomorrow since we bought some studio time.

Since I have no room for drum set here I made similar drum beat using keyboard so bear with it. It is a 50 sec sample of the main rhythm and solo sections. (Keep in mind I wont be doing much of the soloing the actual guitarist will)

Just tell me what you think and what I can improve on. The timing isnt perfect since its a ruff copy, but other than that its what I am showing them for an idea. I need some lyrics also, which I am having some trouble coming up with for this mood. So any ideas? Any help will be greatly appreciated.

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**Janszoon** · 12-14-2008, 11:37 PM

I definitely hear a lot of potential there, with a little tightening up I think it could be a really great song. As far as picking the right lyrics for the mood I don't know but what the song made me think of is swanky new clothes and a friday night out on the town. Maybe that helps.

Dr_Rez · 12-15-2008, 12:07 AM

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Originally Posted by Janszoon

I definitely hear a lot of potential there, with a little tightening up I think it could be a really great song. As far as picking the right lyrics for the mood I don't know but what the song made me think of is swanky new clothes and a friday night out on the town. Maybe that helps.

Thanks for the reply. It will be tighter when its actually recorded and played by our actual guitarist.

Lol funny impression to get. I was somewhat trying to imitate a progressive acid trip in which your thinking about your self. Sounds ****ing stupid but hey, what the hell.

Dr_Rez · 12-16-2008, 04:51 PM

Ge Wiz thanks for all the help MusicBanter. Can always count on you...

**Janszoon** · 12-19-2008, 12:55 AM

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Originally Posted by RezZ

Ge Wiz thanks for all the help MusicBanter. Can always count on you...

Well I was there for you, buddy.

TripperOfCCC · 12-19-2008, 12:50 AM

feel your feet lead you to the sky
like dying is meant for you and i
i hope you stop to smell the roses
hope you slip and split like Moses
ihope you take my words
i hope you read them well
i hope you understand
you gotta die
welcome to hell

i never knew a place like this existed

12-14-2008, 11:24 PM	#1 (permalink)
Dr_Rez Registered Jimmy Rustler Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: USA Posts: 5,370	A song idea, need lyrics and little advice. I have uploaded the sample I made that my band will try to turn into a song tomorrow since we bought some studio time. Since I have no room for drum set here I made similar drum beat using keyboard so bear with it. It is a 50 sec sample of the main rhythm and solo sections. (Keep in mind I wont be doing much of the soloing the actual guitarist will) Just tell me what you think and what I can improve on. The timing isnt perfect since its a ruff copy, but other than that its what I am showing them for an idea. I need some lyrics also, which I am having some trouble coming up with for this mood. So any ideas? Any help will be greatly appreciated. MEGAUPLOAD - The leading online storage and file delivery service __________________ Best chance of losing virginity is in prison crew Always Checks Credentials Crew nba > nfl crew Shave one of my legs to pretend its a girl in my bed crew

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Janszoon Mate, Spawn & Die Join Date: May 2007 Location: The Rapping Community Posts: 24,593	I definitely hear a lot of potential there, with a little tightening up I think it could be a really great song. As far as picking the right lyrics for the mood I don't know but what the song made me think of is swanky new clothes and a friday night out on the town. Maybe that helps. __________________ A Night in the Life of the Invisible Man Time & Place 25 Albums You Should Hear Before the Moon Crashes into the Earth and We All Die last.fm

12-16-2008, 04:51 PM	#4 (permalink)
Dr_Rez Registered Jimmy Rustler Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: USA Posts: 5,370	Ge Wiz thanks for all the help MusicBanter. Can always count on you... __________________ Best chance of losing virginity is in prison crew Always Checks Credentials Crew nba > nfl crew Shave one of my legs to pretend its a girl in my bed crew

12-19-2008, 12:50 AM	#6 (permalink)
TripperOfCCC Groupie Join Date: Dec 2008 Location: In nashville for now, Posts: 1	feel your feet lead you to the sky like dying is meant for you and i i hope you stop to smell the roses hope you slip and split like Moses ihope you take my words i hope you read them well i hope you understand you gotta die welcome to hell i never knew a place like this existed