my life is death without you (song, hands)

anticipation · 11-19-2007, 08:36 PM

don't look at me with those eyes
those eyes that doubt and question me,
those eyes that ask why i don't say
"my life is death without you"
and why i don't profess my love for you
and shout it from the rooftops
while loveless star-gazers pine and lust in the moonlight.

these rooftops are an unfit stage to act out the tragedy of my life,
the tragedy that you helped to write.

we embrace like the crashing of waves
like the awkward meeting of hands between strangers,
and then depart
until only moonlight remains
only moonlight remains.

sleepy jack · 11-19-2007, 08:41 PM

This isn't one big cliche at all.

anticipation · 11-19-2007, 08:44 PM

i took the part out about the songbirds.

should i put it back?

sleepy jack · 11-19-2007, 08:47 PM

Yeah put that back as well as the part about crying tears so black and bleeding blood so crimson.

~~CAPTAIN CAVEMAN~~ · 11-19-2007, 08:48 PM

lol o ****.

I agree though, too cliched.

11-19-2007, 08:36 PM	#1 (permalink)
anticipation Music Addict Join Date: Jun 2005 Posts: 3,565	my life is death without you don't look at me with those eyes those eyes that doubt and question me, those eyes that ask why i don't say "my life is death without you" and why i don't profess my love for you and shout it from the rooftops while loveless star-gazers pine and lust in the moonlight. these rooftops are an unfit stage to act out the tragedy of my life, the tragedy that you helped to write. we embrace like the crashing of waves like the awkward meeting of hands between strangers, and then depart until only moonlight remains only moonlight remains.

11-19-2007, 08:41 PM	#2 (permalink)
sleepy jack isfckingdead Join Date: Nov 2004 Posts: 18,967	This isn't one big cliche at all.

11-19-2007, 08:44 PM	#3 (permalink)
anticipation Music Addict Join Date: Jun 2005 Posts: 3,565	i took the part out about the songbirds. should i put it back?

11-19-2007, 08:47 PM	#4 (permalink)
sleepy jack isfckingdead Join Date: Nov 2004 Posts: 18,967	Yeah put that back as well as the part about crying tears so black and bleeding blood so crimson.

11-19-2007, 08:48 PM	#5 (permalink)
~~CAPTAIN CAVEMAN~~ Account Disabled Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: VAN Posts: 2,530	lol o ****. I agree though, too cliched.