my first post ever? (lyrics, song, Hang)

redINFLUE_TheFineRedLine · 11-07-2007, 06:52 AM

Well, this is the first forum I've ever posted, so here goes: This is a song I only have a chorus to. Seems to be happening a lot lately. = /

Don't you forget it; it was your fault.
Don't you regret it tomorrow...

I wasn't saying that we need to change,
I was just trying to being lenient
But when you say, I'm the one who doesn't try at anything
I'd like to see, you at least attempt a small apology
But it's all over now, it's all over now
Did it matter anyhow?

-And now that I read this again, you really need music to judge how good lyrics are. It sounds more intense when I sing it.

littleknowitall · 11-07-2007, 07:13 AM

Happens, by and by i thought it was quite good,

SATCHMO · 12-10-2010, 04:48 PM

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Originally Posted by Hemequeellult

здравствуйте, давно искала такой форум. всем спасибки, отдельное спасибо админам)

Totally agree.

s_k · 12-13-2010, 05:35 PM

We can't read that man...

Chaplin · 12-21-2010, 11:11 PM

i agree. words arranged like this would have to be heard sung. hard to picture them making song sense, reads more like poetry.

BananaPhish · 12-22-2010, 08:26 PM

Pretty good...needs to be fleshed out now into a real piece. Well done.

11-07-2007, 06:52 AM	#1 (permalink)
redINFLUE_TheFineRedLine Groupie Join Date: Nov 2007 Location: the bible belt = ( Posts: 8	my first post ever? Well, this is the first forum I've ever posted, so here goes: This is a song I only have a chorus to. Seems to be happening a lot lately. = / Don't you forget it; it was your fault. Don't you regret it tomorrow... I wasn't saying that we need to change, I was just trying to being lenient But when you say, I'm the one who doesn't try at anything I'd like to see, you at least attempt a small apology But it's all over now, it's all over now Did it matter anyhow? -And now that I read this again, you really need music to judge how good lyrics are. It sounds more intense when I sing it.

12-13-2010, 05:35 PM	#4 (permalink)
s_k Music Addict Join Date: Nov 2010 Location: The Netherlands Posts: 2,206	We can't read that man... __________________ Click here to see my collection

11-07-2007, 07:13 AM	#2 (permalink)
littleknowitall Pow! Join Date: Dec 2005 Posts: 1,671	Happens, by and by i thought it was quite good,

12-21-2010, 11:11 PM	#5 (permalink)
Chaplin Groupie Join Date: Oct 2010 Location: Dallas, TX Posts: 17	i agree. words arranged like this would have to be heard sung. hard to picture them making song sense, reads more like poetry.

12-22-2010, 08:26 PM	#6 (permalink)
BananaPhish Groupie Join Date: Oct 2010 Location: Pennsylvania Posts: 46	Pretty good...needs to be fleshed out now into a real piece. Well done.