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down the rabbit hole
Join Date: Jun 2007
Location: the mountain called monkey
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Does cloud nine exist?
Beyond the crystal irony, this figment of bliss achieves nothing more than the rise of my fist. . Why was I excluded? Am I undeserving? Never was I convicted Furthermore I remain committed . What do I care? I am better off without this unjust fare. Secretly I ponder, If only I was there. I wrote this as a poem but realized it maybe had potential as a song. Let me know what you think about it, and whether or not you believe it could be turned into a song. |
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