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Old 07-05-2007, 08:52 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Default irony - a work in progress

Does cloud nine exist?

Beyond the crystal irony,

this figment of bliss

achieves nothing more

than the rise of my fist.

.

Why was I excluded?

Am I undeserving?

Never was I convicted

Furthermore

I remain committed

.

What do I care?

I am better off without

this unjust fare.

Secretly I ponder,

If only I was there.




I wrote this as a poem but realized it maybe had potential as a song. Let me know what you think about it, and whether or not you believe it could be turned into a song.
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