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Old 06-26-2007, 03:54 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Default six touches a day

i miss my, baby girl
the one i hold without a care in the world
shes my light, through the night
i miss my, baby girl

she told me six touches a day
will keep the doctor away
i laughed with slight dismay
but she was right (silent beat)

people always tell you love is this and love is that
but a poet couldnt express quite where im at
im caught up in your web and i dont wanna get free
i could be your prey for all eternity

i wrote this song just for you
in case you start to feel a little blue
play this track and know that
i love you and i want you back


obviously you would have to hear the song to understand the how the rythm fits with the lyrics at certain points, but i was just wondering from an outerspective view what it looks like. i know i only have posted 2 songs and both have been semi-love so feel free to insert your generic bashing below. besides that, im working on the other... seems like songs about chicks are just easier to write.
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Old 06-29-2007, 04:15 PM   #2 (permalink)
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I like it, definately seems catchy...
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Old 07-04-2007, 09:39 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Originally Posted by jgd85 View Post
i miss my, baby girl
the one i hold without a care in the world
shes my light, through the night
i miss my, baby girl

she told me six touches a day
will keep the doctor away
i laughed with slight dismay
but she was right (silent beat)

people always tell you love is this and love is that
but a poet couldnt express quite where im at
im caught up in your web and i dont wanna get free
i could be your prey for all eternity

i wrote this song just for you
in case you start to feel a little blue
play this track and know that
i love you and i want you back


obviously you would have to hear the song to understand the how the rythm fits with the lyrics at certain points, but i was just wondering from an outerspective view what it looks like. i know i only have posted 2 songs and both have been semi-love so feel free to insert your generic bashing below. besides that, im working on the other... seems like songs about chicks are just easier to write.
Very Kiedist(By the Way era). I can hear it perfectly as a Chili Peppers song...Quite catchy.
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