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06-26-2007, 03:54 PM | #1 (permalink) |
down the rabbit hole
Join Date: Jun 2007
Location: the mountain called monkey
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six touches a day
i miss my, baby girl
the one i hold without a care in the world shes my light, through the night i miss my, baby girl she told me six touches a day will keep the doctor away i laughed with slight dismay but she was right (silent beat) people always tell you love is this and love is that but a poet couldnt express quite where im at im caught up in your web and i dont wanna get free i could be your prey for all eternity i wrote this song just for you in case you start to feel a little blue play this track and know that i love you and i want you back obviously you would have to hear the song to understand the how the rythm fits with the lyrics at certain points, but i was just wondering from an outerspective view what it looks like. i know i only have posted 2 songs and both have been semi-love so feel free to insert your generic bashing below. besides that, im working on the other... seems like songs about chicks are just easier to write. |
07-04-2007, 09:39 PM | #3 (permalink) | |
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Location: Berkeley, California
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