six touches a day
 

i miss my, baby girl
the one i hold without a care in the world
shes my light, through the night
i miss my, baby girl

she told me six touches a day
will keep the doctor away
i laughed with slight dismay
but she was right (silent beat)

people always tell you love is this and love is that
but a poet couldnt express quite where im at
im caught up in your web and i dont wanna get free
i could be your prey for all eternity

i wrote this song just for you
in case you start to feel a little blue
play this track and know that
i love you and i want you back


obviously you would have to hear the song to understand the how the rythm fits with the lyrics at certain points, but i was just wondering from an outerspective view what it looks like. i know i only have posted 2 songs and both have been semi-love so feel free to insert your generic bashing below. besides that, im working on the other... seems like songs about chicks are just easier to write.

I like it, definately seems catchy...

Very Kiedist(By the Way era). I can hear it perfectly as a Chili Peppers song...Quite catchy.