more of a poem...
 

But I would love to get some opinions on it... Could it be a song??

You were a little boy.
small, shy, and scared.
That has made you
Who you are today.

You went through Military school,
With loving help from your sister.
That has made you
Who you are today.

You started racing,
You wrecked and won.
That has made you
Who you are today.

You lost your dad,
On that February day.
That has made you
Who you are today.

You got through,
All of the pain.
That has made yu
Who you are today.

With lots of help
From family and friends.
That has made you
Who you are today.

You chose to leave
The team your father built.
That has made you
Who you are today.

Your brave and strong,
And I'm happy to say.
I'm sure your dad is proud
Of who you are today..

(Cheriejrfan)

And now someones writing terrible poetry,
About who you are today.

WHAT?????? So you think it's terrible????

This is not something I have been doing for a long time... I have come here for help and advice... you can't help me or give me some good advice??

I'm not experienced in poetry or songwriting, but I think any poem can be a song if it is put to music.

yo cherie chill dont get your panties in a knot. lots of great artist got laughed/kicked out of studios before they became famous. its part of what makes you grow as an artist. if you really care about what everyone thinks, you will get stuck in the idea of entertaining the masses and sacrifice artistic talent. isnt wrong or right, its just your choice.

Yeah, but this is really bad.

I've read some of your, their no better!!!

He hasn't even posted any.

Oh I'm sorry I thought that was you I was talking to... I guess I should look closer next time!!

O SHI

ZING