more of a poem... (quote, artist, talent, song)

cheriejrfan · 07-01-2007, 02:05 PM

I was just hoping to get some feedback. How is it, If it needs work then some suggestions would be nice..

Divide and Fall Apart · 07-01-2007, 03:24 PM

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Originally Posted by cheriejrfan

I was just hoping to get some feedback. How is it, If it needs work then some suggestions would be nice..

Its a nice poem.....not sure whether it could be turned into a song though! But its a good story, Im not exactly a poetry expert, lol, but it was a good read.

cheriejrfan · 07-01-2007, 08:14 PM

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Originally Posted by Divide and Fall Apart

Its a nice poem.....not sure whether it could be turned into a song though! But its a good story, Im not exactly a poetry expert, lol, but it was a good read.

Thank You..

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