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06-22-2007, 09:53 AM | #1 (permalink) |
down the rabbit hole
Join Date: Jun 2007
Location: the mountain called monkey
Posts: 764
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whatcha think?
"like a pair of shoes"
i just wanna chill in my room with nobody but me and you with messy hair in our underwear i wanna stay in bed for good well turn off both of our phones lay down relaxing our bones close our eyes and pretend were in the carribean we can sit and watch cartoons with scooby doo and the crew we can paint a picture in two ill do anything with you well turn of both of our phones lay down relaxing our bones close our eyes and pretend were back in austin baby baby i love you we go together like a pair of shoes your my better half i know its true i dont care i dont care - song i wrote that was inspired by many-a-acid trips with a girl. the guitar lick is a beachy blues like tone using D - F#min7th - Emin7th verse, Bmin7th - Emin7th - F#min7th chorus, and a catchy slap and slide Emin7th - F#min7th bridge. there is some finger picking in between the chords but that gives you a general idea. |
06-22-2007, 07:13 PM | #2 (permalink) |
you are freakin out, man
Join Date: Jan 2006
Location: ajax, ontario
Posts: 129
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not bad man, mostly good, i like the chill, relaxed sort of feel. Some words do sorta throw off the flow though, like the usage of the word austin, which doesn't really rhyme with pretend. Besides that, and some less than spectacular similes (like a pair of shoes) its pretty sweet. i'm interested in hearing the finished product... oh, and if you get the time, could you take a look at my song sunraze... just lookin for opinions and stuff
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