Mystr55

Hey everyone, I'm looking for reviews on my songs and singing, thanks. I don't have as much confidence in my singing as I do my dancing or writing so I'm a bit embarrassed to share these videos, but I'm looking for helpful aid in singing and recommendations for me to grow in this art. I really feel that it's a passion of mine that I'd like to give a shot at so that I know I at least tried. Any help would be appreciated.

YouTube - Original Song "It Wasn't Enough" full version
YouTube - Original Song "Aware" clip

thanks so much in advance. oh, and here are the lyrics...

It wasn't enough
It started out with a note
I should have known from the start, you’d go and break my heart

And I was surely naive
Your moves were very oblique, you saw me as weak

You knew about your own game
You’ve run it for quite some time, but now you’ve crossed the line

And I’m here to speak the pain

Did you think that
It wasn’t enough
Did you feel that
It wasn’t enough
I tried to
Give you all of me
I said I’d love you
Unconditionally
But now you’ve done me wrong
And the closest thing you’ll have to me is this song

You broke me all the way in,
You plundered all of my grace, something I can’t replace.

I bet you really felt tough,
At nights when I was alone, you talked to them on your phone.

You thought you had all of me
That was your biggest mistake, my surface you didn’t break.

And I’m here to wreck your name

Did you think that
It wasn’t enough
Did you feel that
It wasn’t enough
I tried to
Give you all of me
I said I’d love you
Unconditionally
But now you’ve done me wrong
And the closest thing you’ll have to me is this song

You played me
You burned me
You broke you choked you smoked me carelessly
You could have had it all
Instead you’re begging me to answer your phone call


Did you think that
It wasn’t enough
Did you feel that
It wasn’t enough
I tried to
Give you all of me
I said I’d love you
Unconditionally
But now you’ve done me wrong

Now I think that
You weren’t enough
And I feel that
You weren’t enough
I tried to
Give you all of me
I said I’d love you
Unconditionally
But now you’ve done me wrong
So go right back to hell where you know you belong.

Aware (still in the works, only have the first verse and chorus done)
I sit here listening
Listening for my phone to ring
I wait here hoping
Hoping it ain’t the same thing
I lie here crying
Crying about these feelings
I sleep here dreaming
Dreaming just for some healing

I think here fighting
Fighting against my foresight
I stand here sighing
Sighing about your delight
I write here speaking
Speaking about your long night
I sing here telling
Telling myself its alright

It’s not tough for you to think about you
When all you do is what you want to do
I don’t care, or don’t want to care
So beware
Beware
That one day I might be aware