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06-19-2007, 01:27 PM | #1 (permalink) |
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Join Date: Jul 2006
Location: new jersey
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just something I threw together..
I haven't written anything in a while, I've been really busy... but I just threw this together about 15 minutes ago, so I decided to post it. I don't think this is as good as any of my previous stuff, but I'd like to hear your comments/criticism.
You're as rebellious as your idols and your nights turn into random I'm writing sessions about subjects your mind can't comprehend And when you dream its of the mystic and far off distant places Escaping from wherever it is that you are trapped And you have days without feeling or emotion where words can't help you so you sit and let the silence speak But if you would just say a word It'd be like pearls in sunlight And so I'd know I'd hear your voice forever So I walk just for the sake of being alone and count the stars that should be ours above Another song of lost love and the little places That sometimes you never get to and sometimes don't even try Where have all the good girls gone? What happened to innocence Broken hearts from open legs and f*cking sluts and sh*t So I walk just for the sake of being alone and count the stars that should be ours above Sing a dying song for those who cannot hear And sing a dying song for those like you who cannot feel I'd shoot the sun out of the sky simply to watch it fall And land and burst and bloom into the flower I thought you were So I walk just for the sake of being alone and count the stars that should be ours above These are the nights when I lie awake and dream of where my life and the future will meet Last edited by IrishWhiskey; 06-19-2007 at 08:41 PM. |