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Old 05-21-2007, 05:58 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Each car
keeps stopping
Ten steps
behind me
There crushed and wondering where they are

And my feet
Get covered
By green roots and
grow stubborn
This street where
I will stand old

and I smell smoke again

Green sweaters
and golf shoes
They drained you
Into a swimming pool
Soon the grass will turn to dust

But my life
grows bigger
And i feel
no trouble
Storms will always head to sea

and I smell smoke again
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Painstaking devotion and love
Surrendered to self preservation
From others who care for themselves
A blindness that touches perfection
But hurts just like anything else

Isolation, isolation, isolation
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Old 05-21-2007, 09:21 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Not a fan of the line breaks. Good though, for the most part.
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What's with people dying? Shit.
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Old 05-29-2007, 12:29 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Same here, maybe add some words, but interesting none the less. Cool
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Old 05-31-2007, 06:46 AM   #4 (permalink)
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hah yeah i couldnt get the ****ing arcade fire out of my head.
SOMETHING
FILLED UP
MY HEART
WITH NOTHING
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