Matchstick Girl (dance, song, hands)

TrampInaTux · 05-02-2007, 05:25 PM

my matchstick girl wakes herself up
from her slumber by the gutter
her withered frame speaks a thousand words
that her mouth can barely mutter

s'all smiley and bright on this grim winters night
for the lovers holding hands under the lampost light
I hold out my arms and I ask her to dance
to that song in my head formed purely by romance

will be built upon when I'm not this tired

right-track · 05-02-2007, 05:31 PM

Scrap the idea that those two verses belong to the same song.
And build on them separately instead.

05-02-2007, 05:25 PM	#1 (permalink)
TrampInaTux that's my war face. Join Date: Nov 2005 Posts: 1,418	Matchstick Girl my matchstick girl wakes herself up from her slumber by the gutter her withered frame speaks a thousand words that her mouth can barely mutter s'all smiley and bright on this grim winters night for the lovers holding hands under the lampost light I hold out my arms and I ask her to dance to that song in my head formed purely by romance will be built upon when I'm not this tired

05-02-2007, 05:31 PM	#2 (permalink)
right-track Atchin' Akai Join Date: May 2005 Location: Unamerica Posts: 8,723	Scrap the idea that those two verses belong to the same song. And build on them separately instead.