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04-24-2007, 11:50 PM
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Darth Sion: Lord of Pain
One of my Star Wars songs, one in a three-piece concept thing about each of the Sith Lords from KOTOR 2.
Broken, yet whole Dark force to be reckoned Held together by anger Enslaved by his hatred Vengeance on mind Death to all Jedi The force as his weapon Darkness, his ally Darth Sion Lord of Pain Darth Sion Master of maim Darth Sion Lord of Pain Darth Sion Master of maim He knows naught of wisdom Knowledge of agony is his power Crushing all opposition Weaklings everywhere cower The bones, the flesh, splintered and scarred The Dark Side keeping the Dark Lord alive Strike him down and he becomes stronger A god amongst the ancient deities Blood stains his crimson blade Blood stains his crimson blade Blood stains his crimson blade The blood of the Jedi he has slain Brutal power and might Black flows in his veins A charred heart keeps it pumping Striking down the lords of the light (Quote; Dialogue between Sion and Kreia; Sion: "I sense you, my master. Faint, weak." Kreia: "Your senses betray you, as you betrayed me." Sion: "After all that has happened, still you live? You are difficult to kill." Kreia: "For one as limited as you, perhaps. To have fallen so far and learned nothing, that is your failing." Sion: "The failure is yours! No longer do your whispers crawl within my skull! No longer do I suffer beneath teachings that weaken us! And now you run in search of the Jedi. They are all dead, save one. And one broken Jedi cannot stop the darkness that is to come.) A slave no more to her teachings A slave no more to her teachings A slave no more to her teachings The student is free from the broken master Darth Sion Lord of Pain Darth Sion Master of maim Darth Sion Lord of Pain Darth Sion Master of maim Hail Darth Sion, Sith Lord of Pain!
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04-24-2007, 11:57 PM
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Ad Astra
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No offense man, but you should just stop writing completely...
Are you just starting out?
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04-25-2007, 12:11 AM
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No, I've been writing for a couple months now.
It probably would make more sense if you knew the character more. Have you played KOTOR II? Darth Sion - Wookieepedia, the Star Wars Wiki
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04-25-2007, 12:14 AM
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Yeah, that explains it.
Everything you write for the first 5 months will usually be crappy. I got a couple of gems in my first year, but it takes a while before you get into the flow.
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04-25-2007, 08:29 PM
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Too late. This isn't the only song. I'll post more later.
Star Wars rules.
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04-25-2007, 10:05 PM
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Hey, if Shat can write about ****, tits, and sticking it in double double chins, then I can write about Darth Vader.
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