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04-24-2007, 09:15 PM | #1 (permalink) |
Music Addict
Join Date: Jul 2006
Location: new jersey
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I Can't Think of a Title
Kind of simple, but here you go. It's not the best, I wrote it around 3 a.m. this morning in the midst of an English term paper.
There is a place, far beyond illusion Through the darkness, beyond all man’s restraints There is a place, where soft amber light’s glow Illumines shadows on my face There’s a place, at the edge of the world In God’s country, or so it may seem I stand immersed, in the afterglow Like a silhouette in a dream There is a place, a sanctuary without walls, Where the sound of silence reigns Troubles not lost, but all is forgotten Serenity, more than words can sing. |
04-25-2007, 05:52 AM | #4 (permalink) |
They call me Tundra Boy
Join Date: Sep 2005
Location: In your linen cupboard.
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If it is actually a song then you should call it There Is A Place because then people will be able to link the name and the song straight away. If it's just a poem then something more creative would be better, as the title would be an additional part of the composition.
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