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Desperation Girl (Part 1 and 2)
I wrote most of this within two days, but spent another three brushing it up.
The pace for the first part is softer and slower, but it gets faster on the second. Part 1 goes directly into part 2, so there is no gap in it whatsoever. Alot of work was put into this, so comments will be appreciated. If you read it, let me know how you like it. Desperation Girl (Part 1 and 2) 04/20/07 - 04/24/07 -----Part 1----- [-----Verse 1-----] She's the girl that you leave when you go out Don't want to be seen, showin' her around What would they think if you - told them how much You have used her? She's the girl that you love when you have the time When she's convienient to you, that's when you think she's fine What would they think if you - told them how much You've abused her? She lifts you up - You keep her down She asks for love You put your hand over her mouth She wants the truth - You look away You lie to her Just to keep a smile on her face Soon enough she'll wake up from this dream Just to find out that you have left again And when she does, she'll finally come to see That you don't care anymore, and you never did You shake your head - She takes your hand You pull it back And tell her she'd never understand [-----End Verse-----] -----Part 2----- [-----Verse 1-----] You took away her better half Then you tried your best, to make her feel bad And now you're having fun - At her expense You broke her heart You said you'd never leave her Then you used her love, to deceive her How could you hurt someone - Who's always been So innocent? You made her dress to look "fit" Though you've always stood, against it You stole the grace from her - I hope you get What you deserve [-----End Verse-----] [-----Chorus-----] You only love her when you can't have, Anyone else She's only good enough, When you tell her she is She's the desperation girl You only love her when you can't have, Anyone else (background) She's the desperation girl She's only good enough, When you tell her she is She's the desperation girl And now she knows just what, She needs to do She's the desperation girl This time, she tells you That she's done with you She's the desperation girl (x2) [-----End Chorus-----] [-----Verse 2-----] You left her living in pain You should have put her down, easily Your better half is dead - It's black and dim Just like the rest I think it's time you moved on And quit using her, for your fun One day you'll pay for this - But what you buy Will be regret She doesn't need to dress up She only needs, to feel loved She's fine just like she is - So what you see Is what you get [-----End Verse-----] [-----Chorus-----] You only love her when you can't have, Anyone else She's only good enough, When you tell her she is She's the desperation girl You only love her when you can't have, Anyone else (background) She's the desperation girl She's only good enough, When you tell her she is She's the desperation girl And now she knows just what, She needs to do She's the desperation girl This time, she tells you That she's done with you She's the desperation girl (x2) [-----End Chorus-----]
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