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Old 04-20-2007, 10:26 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Default A Message in the Dark

Hey... I found this site in my favorites the other day, I joined it a while ago then kind of forgot about it, I forgot what a great site it was.

Anyway, I'm the main lyricist in my band... so here's something of mine. Any comments are welcome.


A Message in the Dark

I wrote a message in the dark
Wakened by the passing cars
grabbed a pen and emptied out my heart

Old cliches and reused words
Thrown into an empty song
[Feels] like I've already waited too long

I sent a message in the dark
[But] I'd rather have you talk with me
'Bout how this world was made for you and me

[Now] I'll just linger at the door
Knowing that you won't be home
Wait four years and see your smile again


You say you've crossed a thousand seas,
But now you're drowning in a stream of
thoughts and bits of you and me?

All that glitters is not gold
Take a fall from a first glance, you don't
realize that life's not a slow dance

I scratched a message in the dark
I can't remember what I wrote
Fallacy, it was just a note.. right?
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