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Music Addict
Join Date: Jul 2006
Location: new jersey
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Hey... I found this site in my favorites the other day, I joined it a while ago then kind of forgot about it, I forgot what a great site it was.
Anyway, I'm the main lyricist in my band... so here's something of mine. Any comments are welcome. ![]() A Message in the Dark I wrote a message in the dark Wakened by the passing cars grabbed a pen and emptied out my heart Old cliches and reused words Thrown into an empty song [Feels] like I've already waited too long I sent a message in the dark [But] I'd rather have you talk with me 'Bout how this world was made for you and me [Now] I'll just linger at the door Knowing that you won't be home Wait four years and see your smile again You say you've crossed a thousand seas, But now you're drowning in a stream of thoughts and bits of you and me? All that glitters is not gold Take a fall from a first glance, you don't realize that life's not a slow dance I scratched a message in the dark I can't remember what I wrote Fallacy, it was just a note.. right? |
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