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Kyren Tsunami 03-26-2007 09:10 PM

Lovely Angel's Song
 
this song is rock song, I wrote this in inspiration from BECK: Mongolian chop sqaud! XD

Lovely Angel's Song

Hey you, the air of love, can you hear me calling for you?
My eyes telling you my obsessions that I cannot speak of the truth
You have appeared in my dream so we make love unfettered
But in order to know my feelings, open up your door
Let me see your world and your sketches of memories

Shine me with your angelic light
Blind me with your lovely sight
I’d jump off the cliff for eternal life
You are the one who I shall thrive
You pour the glitters on my heart
I want to see your untainted smile
But forget about what you’ve heard of me
Just take my hand and come with me
Let us hear the lovely angel’s song
Let us hear the lonely angel’s song, oh, oh, oh, oh!

Now I’m the gentle whisper but do you feel me watching you?
My lip are meant to confess my secrets but I’m scared what’ll happen if they do
What I can tell you in the sun that I’ll be your love in long tomorrow
I’ve survived through lies and sorrows but let’s us fly away together
I just cannot be broken and you’ll have my words

Shine me with your angelic light
Blind me with your lovely sight
I’d jump off the cliff for eternal life
You are the one who I shall thrive
You pour the glitters on my heart
I want to see your untainted smile
But forget about what you’ve heard of me
Just take my hand and come with me
Let us hear the lovely angel’s song
Let us hear the lovely angel’s song, oh, oh, oh, oh!

When we’ll wake up together with the sun, you’ve answer my kiss with midnight shaded lip
When the first time I saw you I knew, you were made from the beauty,
you were born from the light!

Shine me with your angelic light
Blind me with your lovely sight
I’d jump off the cliff for eternal life
You are the one who I shall thrive
You pour the glitters on my heart
I want to see your untainted smile
But forget about what you’ve heard of me
Just take my hand and come with me
Let us hear the lovely angel’s song
Let us hear the lonely angel’s song, oh, oh, oh, oh!

Let us hear the lovely angel’s song
Let us hear the lovely angel’s song
Can you hear me calling for you?
Let us hear the lovely angel’s song
Let us hear the lovely angel’s song
Do you feel me watching you?
Let us hear the lovely angel’s song
Let us hear the lovely angel’s song, oh, oh, oh, oh!

acratertocoffin 03-26-2007 10:38 PM

Sevendust?

Kyren Tsunami 03-26-2007 10:49 PM

What's Sevendust"?

either/or 03-27-2007 01:39 AM

isnt that angel son? not song?
also , kyren are all these words real....

acratertocoffin 03-27-2007 09:13 AM

Sevendust is a nu metal band that wrote a song almost exactly like this one. The difference is that they didn't have jibberish in it like:

Quote:

Originally Posted by Kyren Tsunami (Post 353809)
You are the one who I shall thrive
You pour the glitters on my heart

That doesn't make any sense.

Kyren Tsunami 03-27-2007 11:12 PM

0.o that's new to me, but I never heard of that band though. also that part, you look at it the wrong way.

Quote:

I'd jump off the cliff for eternal life
you are the one I shall thrive
that part is together

to Either/or, it's "Lovely Angel's Song" to be exact, and what do you mean "Are all these words real..."?

acratertocoffin 03-27-2007 11:57 PM

You can't have glitter as a plural noun. That and the metaphor itself just doesn't flow.

Kyren Tsunami 03-28-2007 10:03 PM

I see because the other parts in the chorus consently have flow so then that part broke the flow of course... make sense...

Maybe this one then...

Quote:

You show off your glittery style
I want to see your untainted Smile


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