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Old 03-24-2007, 05:21 AM   #11 (permalink)
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We dream to the singing of the wolves.

Stars rest on barrens,
While wolves sing their lullabies,
The cries. Oh so sweet.
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Old 03-24-2007, 09:23 AM   #12 (permalink)
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I believe the term is 'tanka'; and sure, that's a variant form of haiku; go for it.
hehe sorry about that, same thing different regional dialect....

and i'm abit of a traditionalist with my japanese poetry....

and now i complete the one from earlier:

sleep among the stars
come to me my love
lets us frolic among the fields
and fall among the blooms
we love among the twillight
and sleep among the stars

Plum blossoms
eprimeral plum
blossoms, scattered in the night
who has walked thru my
garden, at this midnight hour
my lovers softest steps

Flowers in the night
sleep among the stars
dream the eprimeral dreams
journey thru the night
in the nocturnal garden
in the flowers if the night
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Old 03-27-2007, 06:35 AM   #13 (permalink)
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C'mon guys, lets get more entries, or get the polls goin.
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Old 03-27-2007, 08:04 AM   #14 (permalink)
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yeah i posted mine, it not that hard to write them come on peoples write more
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Old 03-27-2007, 09:54 AM   #15 (permalink)
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Set your lungs alight
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And take off your nice shoes too"
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Tequila tastes ****
A bit like distilled vomit
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On The Subject of Love

I love Kelly Brooke
Dull personality, BUT
She looks good naked
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This should be a 'Haiku Battles' thread.
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