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Old 03-18-2007, 08:01 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Exclamation Hey, I've Got A Rap For You

I’ve Got A Rap For You

So you know how ya niggas bleed?
You know they suffer?
And yet you’re bouncing in your limo hummer,
Talkin’ about bling bling and killing.

Shove that bling right up your ass.
It was found by slaves,
Black slaves to the white diamond trade.

Acting like you’re a symbol
Of your race and how they’ll prosper
Well, “fiddy,” if you are,
Than the Blacks are pretty ****ed.

Acting like you’re the man,
Because you spit words about “hunnies”
And poppin’ some caps. **** you, violence isn’t cool.
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Old 03-21-2007, 04:21 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Old 03-21-2007, 05:14 AM   #3 (permalink)
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wow, that's really bad. (not the good kind)
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Old 03-21-2007, 05:18 AM   #4 (permalink)
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If violence isn't cool, how do you explain the whole Kung Fu industry? That's hella cool.
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Old 03-21-2007, 05:47 AM   #5 (permalink)
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You're right about what you 'rap', and I sort of like the first two verses. Nice and sarcastic to use such a rap to get that kind of message across. The second two verses are just a bit overdone.

Acting like you’re a symbol
Of your race and how they’ll prosper
Well, “fiddy,” if you are,

(I don't get this part really...)

Than the Blacks are pretty ****ed.
(You just ruin any chance of anyone taking you seriously if you say this...)

Acting like you’re the man,
Because you spit words about “hunnies”

(this part is ok)

And poppin’ some caps.
**** you, violence isn’t cool.

(Abrupt end, and you say violence isn't cool as a statement, which should have been a follow up on a few arguments...)
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Old 03-21-2007, 08:21 AM   #6 (permalink)
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def. interesting idea there. very true in my mind.
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Old 03-21-2007, 05:30 PM   #7 (permalink)
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right idea, wrong way about it, just like hitler
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Old 03-21-2007, 05:31 PM   #8 (permalink)
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just needs a little re-writing, wrong way about it.
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Old 03-21-2007, 05:33 PM   #9 (permalink)
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lovely.
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Old 03-21-2007, 06:07 PM   #10 (permalink)
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really? o.0
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