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03-18-2007, 08:01 PM | #1 (permalink) | |
Ban Captain Caveman
Join Date: Jan 2007
Location: In The Realms of Poetry
Posts: 560
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Hey, I've Got A Rap For You
I’ve Got A Rap For You
So you know how ya niggas bleed? You know they suffer? And yet you’re bouncing in your limo hummer, Talkin’ about bling bling and killing. Shove that bling right up your ass. It was found by slaves, Black slaves to the white diamond trade. Acting like you’re a symbol Of your race and how they’ll prosper Well, “fiddy,” if you are, Than the Blacks are pretty ****ed. Acting like you’re the man, Because you spit words about “hunnies” And poppin’ some caps. **** you, violence isn’t cool.
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03-21-2007, 05:14 AM | #3 (permalink) |
Bitchfarmer
Join Date: Apr 2006
Location: Between the minarettes, down the Casbah way.
Posts: 983
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wow, that's really bad. (not the good kind)
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03-21-2007, 05:47 AM | #5 (permalink) |
Scarf
Join Date: May 2006
Location: Brighton, UK
Posts: 715
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You're right about what you 'rap', and I sort of like the first two verses. Nice and sarcastic to use such a rap to get that kind of message across. The second two verses are just a bit overdone.
Acting like you’re a symbol Of your race and how they’ll prosper Well, “fiddy,” if you are, (I don't get this part really...) Than the Blacks are pretty ****ed. (You just ruin any chance of anyone taking you seriously if you say this...) Acting like you’re the man, Because you spit words about “hunnies” (this part is ok) And poppin’ some caps. **** you, violence isn’t cool. (Abrupt end, and you say violence isn't cool as a statement, which should have been a follow up on a few arguments...)
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