Wrote this two years ago for a band i was in... (lyrics, drum)

littleknowitall · 03-17-2007, 09:51 PM

My Affair.

Verse 1:
G…
Wine gently runs through the branches
Bb…
through the ages through us it passes
C…
And slowly takes us through the passage
G…
Counting days until we’re free
G…
Distorted visions they now seem to me
Bb…
As common as once was reality
C…
More a lifestyle than a necessity
G…
brief moments of clarity in the…

Chorus:
G…
…Ashes
Bb…
For as long as I had
C…
Hoped for…
D…
Escaped enough to find the
G…
Misery…
Bb…
The misery that I had
C…
Longed for… That I had
G…
Longed for

Verse 2:
G…
Been a long time since I could find myself
Bb…
Bought my freedom from the shelf
C…
And it doesn’t take much to lose yourself
G…
Can’t seem to fall from the stairway
G…
I dream but I just don’t feel
Bb…
Like I’m resting now its future-real
C…
This love affair with endorphin meals
G…
Brief moments of clarity in the…

Chorus:
G…
…Ashes
Bb…
For as long as I had
C…
Hoped for…
D…
Escaped enough to find the
G…
Misery…
Bb…
The misery that I had
C…
Longed for… That I had
G…
Longed for

sleepy jack · 03-17-2007, 10:21 PM

I don't like the rhyming of passes/passages because they sound too similar. Other then that its solid.

littleknowitall · 03-17-2007, 10:30 PM

I'll get the misses to sing it on recording soon mate so you can hear how it sounds...thanks for commenting by the way, i dont write much so when i do i like atleast a little feedback.

Kyren Tsunami · 03-17-2007, 11:41 PM

O.O I think it's a bit too rythms don't you think??? ^^! despite of that I can see what is the tune going to be for this one. lol

littleknowitall · 03-18-2007, 06:16 AM

It's not too difficult to establish really is it...

Kyren Tsunami · 03-22-2007, 09:39 PM

I agree so, your style are more to establish sceneries but there some emotions in there?? by the way I was able to find least 3 people to would want to play rock music with me but it's just leave the drummer. but my best friend going to try to gring one of his friend who play drum crazy to join, I thank the god! T-T

enemyat_thesix · 03-22-2007, 09:53 PM

the constant rhyming is distracting, and detracts from the lyrics.

Kyren Tsunami · 03-22-2007, 10:16 PM

there shouldn't be alot of rythms though, probably distort the tune then

tdoc210 · 03-22-2007, 10:18 PM

the chords sound weird on my out of tune guitar

littleknowitall · 03-25-2007, 11:48 AM

haha, tune it? and your actually trying it? do you want me to record it so you can hear how it sounds?

03-17-2007, 09:51 PM	#1 (permalink)
littleknowitall Pow! Join Date: Dec 2005 Posts: 1,671	Wrote this two years ago for a band i was in... My Affair. Verse 1: G… Wine gently runs through the branches Bb… through the ages through us it passes C… And slowly takes us through the passage G… Counting days until we’re free G… Distorted visions they now seem to me Bb… As common as once was reality C… More a lifestyle than a necessity G… brief moments of clarity in the… Chorus: G… …Ashes Bb… For as long as I had C… Hoped for… D… Escaped enough to find the G… Misery… Bb… The misery that I had C… Longed for… That I had G… Longed for Verse 2: G… Been a long time since I could find myself Bb… Bought my freedom from the shelf C… And it doesn’t take much to lose yourself G… Can’t seem to fall from the stairway G… I dream but I just don’t feel Bb… Like I’m resting now its future-real C… This love affair with endorphin meals G… Brief moments of clarity in the… Chorus: G… …Ashes Bb… For as long as I had C… Hoped for… D… Escaped enough to find the G… Misery… Bb… The misery that I had C… Longed for… That I had G… Longed for

03-17-2007, 11:41 PM	#4 (permalink)
Kyren Tsunami Music Addict Join Date: Feb 2006 Posts: 64	O.O I think it's a bit too rythms don't you think??? ^^! despite of that I can see what is the tune going to be for this one. lol __________________ all the songs I've Wrotes cames from experiences from the past, present and future.

03-22-2007, 09:39 PM	#6 (permalink)
Kyren Tsunami Music Addict Join Date: Feb 2006 Posts: 64	I agree so, your style are more to establish sceneries but there some emotions in there?? by the way I was able to find least 3 people to would want to play rock music with me but it's just leave the drummer. but my best friend going to try to gring one of his friend who play drum crazy to join, I thank the god! T-T __________________ all the songs I've Wrotes cames from experiences from the past, present and future.

03-22-2007, 10:16 PM	#8 (permalink)
Kyren Tsunami Music Addict Join Date: Feb 2006 Posts: 64	there shouldn't be alot of rythms though, probably distort the tune then __________________ all the songs I've Wrotes cames from experiences from the past, present and future.

03-22-2007, 10:18 PM	#9 (permalink)
tdoc210 ashes against the grain Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: new hampsha Posts: 2,617	the chords sound weird on my out of tune guitar __________________ We went back there and they had come and hacked off every inoculated arm. There they were in a pile. A pile of little arms. And I remember... I... I... I cried. I wept like some grandmother. I wanted to tear my teeth out. I didn't know what I wanted to do. And I want to remember it. I never want to forget it. I never want to forget. And then I realized... like I was shot... like I was shot with a diamond... a diamond bullet right through my forehead. And I thought: My God... the genius of that.

03-17-2007, 10:30 PM	#3 (permalink)
littleknowitall Pow! Join Date: Dec 2005 Posts: 1,671	I'll get the misses to sing it on recording soon mate so you can hear how it sounds...thanks for commenting by the way, i dont write much so when i do i like atleast a little feedback.

03-18-2007, 06:16 AM	#5 (permalink)
littleknowitall Pow! Join Date: Dec 2005 Posts: 1,671	It's not too difficult to establish really is it...

03-25-2007, 11:48 AM	#10 (permalink)
littleknowitall Pow! Join Date: Dec 2005 Posts: 1,671	haha, tune it? and your actually trying it? do you want me to record it so you can hear how it sounds?