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Old 03-16-2007, 04:32 AM   #1 (permalink)
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To The One That Cares?

So I Left The Harbor Today
Its Gonna Be A Long Trip
My Sails Were Up The Wind Was Cast
But Im The Only One Maning The Ship

A Beautiful Day Sun Shining Bright
Deep Blue Water Seagulls At Flight
But Where There Was All Things Great
I Lost My Love Let The Water Take

Take Me Away To Another Land
Green Green Grass White Soft Sand
I Need It Now More Than Ever
Im Missing You To Love The Weather

So Its Been Ive Been There
Ive Seen The Things That Most Wont Dare
But None Has Given The Satisfactory
Of Me Being Home And You Loving Me

Its The Way It Was When I Found Your Bottle
Written Inside Was Your Note Of Love
Asking And Hoping For The One Same Soul
The One You Would Love To The Time Of Us Old
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Old 03-16-2007, 04:55 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Where are you from? Some of the grammar in this is bizarre and I assume that either English is not your first language or you are trying to force rhymes into the song harder than any song I've ever seen before.
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When Pete plays it is 100% live , your music if that's what you call it doesn't sound so good either? so you can't really critercize can you ?
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