The Only Thing Worth Living For (quote)

The Dave · 03-15-2007, 04:33 PM

Okay, well first off, I'm no Ethan or Ben but I figured I'd give this forum a go. I'm always open to criticism and ways to improve this if anyone has some.

Well love I've found an empty field, it's barren
without hope, or the slightest dream
for a renewal of life.
I won't park my truck there, it's too innocent
for machine bred allusions of a perfect life.
So I'll take my shoes in hand, walk delicately
across this field that no man has ever touched.
Others would've placed caution strips,
but I will raise it to the sun!
For in that field, in that barren center,
there's a spot of good soil, through and through. And,
and, I know I've got what it takes to make it grow!
For it's the only thing I've found worth living for
in this life, hendered by the pursuit that we
falsely place upon our own hearts.

03-15-2007, 04:33 PM	#1 (permalink)
The Dave Me and The Major Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: Kentucky Posts: 1,815	The Only Thing Worth Living For Okay, well first off, I'm no Ethan or Ben but I figured I'd give this forum a go. I'm always open to criticism and ways to improve this if anyone has some. Well love I've found an empty field, it's barren without hope, or the slightest dream for a renewal of life. I won't park my truck there, it's too innocent for machine bred allusions of a perfect life. So I'll take my shoes in hand, walk delicately across this field that no man has ever touched. Others would've placed caution strips, but I will raise it to the sun! For in that field, in that barren center, there's a spot of good soil, through and through. And, and, I know I've got what it takes to make it grow! For it's the only thing I've found worth living for in this life, hendered by the pursuit that we falsely place upon our own hearts. Last edited by The Dave; 03-18-2007 at 04:53 PM.