Good Will Come (lyric, Kiss, American, title, review)

Crowe · 03-11-2007, 03:31 PM

I couldn't connect with it, because the situation you wrote about it pretty specific and esoteric. But I think if it means something to you, then ... yeah, right on. It's well written for what it is - but like I said, you might want to open the ideas up more if you want other people to connect with your song! I don't know how to go about advising that though - good work.

03-11-2007, 03:31 PM	#1 (permalink)
Crowe Music Addict Join Date: Dec 2005 Posts: 690	I couldn't connect with it, because the situation you wrote about it pretty specific and esoteric. But I think if it means something to you, then ... yeah, right on. It's well written for what it is - but like I said, you might want to open the ideas up more if you want other people to connect with your song! I don't know how to go about advising that though - good work. __________________