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03-08-2007, 10:46 PM | #1 (permalink) |
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Loveless and Careless
All my chances just had fall apart
I have lost my love toward you It has been discarded to the bottom of my heart I no longer have any feeling to concern I’ve hurts people who have shown me their loves I’ve locked my emotions away; throw it at the fireplace to burn Conceal the spell that made people quite humane I remain on the neutral side with my ambitions or not It’s not my place to be or there a darkness that haven't sought The way you people are, it’s irritate me, caring and loving is not my place to be I've realized that I’m rebellious because I hate being religious! It’s loveless; it is my true benifit to be unfeeling And I’m careless; I have no regret of my actions The way people suffers are my satisfaction I’m Inhumane but I cannot be stop My hatred in my heart is at the top It will take a miracle for me to care And therefore you have right to be scare Spell the words that make me feel pains The day amuse me when it’s damped and stained I stand in the front of the wall of window I merely scoffed when I see such despair Although I have despite the view of rainbow At the time people glancing, I give them a stare Which it’s heartless and cold but I can’t get scolded I was told that I don’t deserve to be in this world It’s too bad that I am here, and you can’t change things with your words I believe I get tenacious when I kept hearing people saying to their love ones “you’re precious” It’s loveless; it is my true benifit to be unfeeling And I’m careless; I have no regret of my actions The way people suffers are my satisfaction I’m Inhumane but I cannot be stop My hatred in my heart is at the top It will take a miracle for me to care And therefore you have right to be scare I was in a mental rehab but I've escaped into a cab I’m unlike a human yet Iact like a Lucifer What takes me to be humane was the girl I have fall for her I clean my ways, I clean my act Now she and I can make some pacts But it’s still like I don’t have a will To go on a life which I can thrive! It’s loveless; it is my true benifit to unfeeling And I’m careless; I have no regret of my actions The way people suffers are my satisfaction I’m Inhumane but I cannot be stop My hatred in my heart is at the top It will take a miracle for me to care And therefore you have right to be scare It’s loveless; it is my true befinit to unfeeling And I’m careless; I have no regret of my actions The way people suffers are my satisfaction I’m Inhumane but I cannot be stop My hatred in my heart is at the top It will take a miracle for me to care And therefore you have right to be scare
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03-09-2007, 05:02 PM | #3 (permalink) |
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I don't know how it can be in poor english but I do see few minor errors though. if you're in USA then your english is different however I'm in canada.
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03-09-2007, 05:23 PM | #4 (permalink) |
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Yeah, here Canada, English be complete different, nothing Americans like we do here.
No, don't excuse yourself, your grammar is atrocious.
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03-09-2007, 09:58 PM | #9 (permalink) |
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Honestly, your English isn't too bad, I can definitely understand you, but the grammar is bad, I.E. you pluralize (add s's when they don't need it), and use the wrong tense in your verbs, like when you say 'I'd hurts people who have shown their loves, it should say I've hurt people who have shown their love, so in other words, we can definitely understand, but you do need a lesson in grammar, hey I don't know a lick of any other language, so I'm pretty impressed by it.
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