Crossfire
 

(Metalcore song; see if you can guess which parts are gang vocals and where the breakdowns are. :D)

Lock those lips
before you hurt someone.
Your mouth is a loaded gun.
Every word is a bullet,
and your aim’s dead on.

No one is spared;
No one is safe;
No one is guilty.

Duck for cover.

Machinegun conversations
leave wounds that will never quite heal.
When all is said and done,
you’ll have nowhere left to run.

Standing amidst the bodies
with no one else to condemn,
turn the gun on yourself:
Eat your words.

No one is spared;
No one is safe;
We are all guilty.

Duck for cover.

I think w/ the right kind of music w/ a dark tone to the lyrics it could be alright; otherwise it seems like a lot of lyrics I've already heard before-person/mouth=gun, words=ammo, seems pretty common, no offense

Yeah, I understand it's nothing original. :D