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Old 03-07-2007, 08:22 PM   #11 (permalink)
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Wow. Now that it's over I can't believe I spent my time debating that.
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Old 03-07-2007, 08:22 PM   #12 (permalink)
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can i complain about how big you font size on your sig is then?

its distracting me from your post.

and at raconteur, thanks for the no-caps.
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Old 03-07-2007, 08:33 PM   #13 (permalink)
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I just figured there was no way it worse than Momma Garner's sig.
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Old 03-08-2007, 02:40 AM   #14 (permalink)
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You know what'd be great? If everywhere I post you didn't try to put me down. Lol. I mean, it's not that you're succeeding, but your posts are a waste of fucking time. Lol.
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Old 03-08-2007, 03:20 AM   #15 (permalink)
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guys guys lets just write ill use spell check
and just try to actually read the writings
all of them if you can
we shoud try to make each other positive
constructive criticism not harmful indangerment
ps where in the hell is the spell check deal im not downloading it
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Old 03-08-2007, 10:19 AM   #16 (permalink)
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This thread is a waste of the internet.
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Old 03-08-2007, 06:25 PM   #17 (permalink)
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ROFL. Pwned.
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Old 03-08-2007, 11:05 PM   #18 (permalink)
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theusedtoolguy, stop being such a tool, honestly, if you're going to go out of your way to insult members, at least make it relevant to the thread topic and not be so much of a bullsh*t waste of space post as the one you posted.

theraconteur21, props on cleaning up the spelling and grammer, this way it's not distracting and people can concentrate on the actual poem. Is IS VERY important to do this, because if you can't even take the time to make your poems and songs follow propper gramatical structure, none of us are going to want to take the time to critique it. As for the poem itself, there's some continuity issues here. What I mean by that, is that you've used a lot of different metaphors and analogies, so the point ends up being muddled in all of this. Simplify it by finding one analogy for the ENTIRE song.
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Old 03-09-2007, 03:16 AM   #19 (permalink)
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well see i did
but because we cant relate you might not understand
its just about a girl who dosnt care to be with the one she loves
just because shes a bird dosnt mean shes a cat
NO spell check SRY
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