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03-06-2007, 02:50 AM | #1 (permalink) |
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The Differance Of Us All
White Black The Differance Of Us All
But We Live So Plastic Like A Maniquin In A Mall We Do Things To Hurt To Cause Despair But Your The One Falling Cause You Dont Care Cause You Falling Down, Down To The Ground Continous Motion Perpetual Sound You Scavage Forthe Perfect Moment Of Your Last Great Enjoyment Shaded Grays Darkened Blacks Social Decay The Smell Of Gas Its Come To This Im Walkng Away Away From Them But I Need To Stay Cause You Falling Down, Down To The Ground Continous Motion Perpetual Sound You Scavage Forthe Perfect Moment Of Your Last Great Enjoyment Now As Your Last Chance Approaches The Last Fork Before The Last Super Will You Change Your Name Or Just Play Your Game Cause You Falling Down, Down To The Ground Continous Motion Perpetual Sound You Scavage Forthe Perfect Moment Of Your Last Great Enjoyment Cause Ill Lift You Up Ill Hold You High The Moment Has Stopped To Say Good Bye You Needed The Key To Open The Door But When You Open It Will You Need More |
03-06-2007, 03:20 AM | #4 (permalink) | |
Ban Captain Caveman
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Also, you don't have to capitalize every word. It's actually annoying, to be quite honest with you.
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03-06-2007, 03:27 AM | #6 (permalink) |
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So Are Yu The God Of Writing Structure Please Teach Me You Ways Oooops Capitalization
Sorry Just The Way I Write I Thought All Of You Would Judge Or Try To Be Opened Minded To The Meaning Not Bash The Grammar Flood Forum? |
03-06-2007, 03:34 AM | #9 (permalink) | |
Ban Captain Caveman
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Yeah, I've been writing since 5 or 6, so, I understand it pretty well.
ABCDEFGHIJKLMNOPQRSTUVWXYZ < Those are capitalized letters. You use them for names, beginning of sentences/lines. abcdefghijklmonpqrstuvwxyz < These are not capitalized. These you use for everything else. I wasn't trying to be mean, I was just wondering. Trust me, the internet is not where I look to boost my self-esteem. Also, it's spelled "grammar." By flood forum I mean, you're posting like twenty songs at a time. That is way too many. Way, way too many. One or two a day.
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03-06-2007, 01:14 PM | #10 (permalink) |
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That's pretty obvious. But why share stuff that you're not putting much effort into. It's inevitable, that if you don't take the time to write thoughtfully and polish your work, you'll rarely ever come up with anything worth the time it takes others to read it.
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