THERACONTEUR21

White Black The Differance Of Us All
But We Live So Plastic Like A Maniquin In A Mall
We Do Things To Hurt To Cause Despair
But Your The One Falling Cause You Dont Care

Cause You Falling Down, Down To The Ground
Continous Motion Perpetual Sound
You Scavage Forthe Perfect Moment
Of Your Last Great Enjoyment

Shaded Grays Darkened Blacks
Social Decay The Smell Of Gas
Its Come To This Im Walkng Away
Away From Them But I Need To Stay

Cause You Falling Down, Down To The Ground
Continous Motion Perpetual Sound
You Scavage Forthe Perfect Moment
Of Your Last Great Enjoyment

Now As Your Last Chance Approaches
The Last Fork Before The Last Super
Will You Change Your Name
Or Just Play Your Game

Cause You Falling Down, Down To The Ground
Continous Motion Perpetual Sound
You Scavage Forthe Perfect Moment
Of Your Last Great Enjoyment

Cause Ill Lift You Up Ill Hold You High
The Moment Has Stopped To Say Good Bye
You Needed The Key To Open The Door
But When You Open It Will You Need More

Blain

Lol @ your grammar.

THERACONTEUR21

Is It That Bad I Dont Try To Make It Perfect I Jsut Write
I Write Mostof This Stuff In Lik E 5 Mins
Sorry For The Grammar Is My Writing Bad Though

PaperHurricanesAndPlanes

Also, you don't have to capitalize every word. It's actually annoying, to be quite honest with you.

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PaperHurricanesAndPlanes

Also, stop flooding the forum.

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THERACONTEUR21

So Are Yu The God Of Writing Structure Please Teach Me You Ways Oooops Capitalization
Sorry Just The Way I Write I Thought All Of You Would Judge Or Try To Be Opened Minded To The Meaning Not Bash The Grammar
Flood Forum?

PaperHurricanesAndPlanes

English is like...your 4th or 5th language, huh?

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THERACONTEUR21

Maybe Why Doe Sit Realy Matter Aout The Grammer That Musch So You May Be Better Does That Help Your Self Esteem Im Glad To Be Your Stepping Stone
Do You Understand Writing

PaperHurricanesAndPlanes

Yeah, I've been writing since 5 or 6, so, I understand it pretty well.

ABCDEFGHIJKLMNOPQRSTUVWXYZ < Those are capitalized letters. You use them for names, beginning of sentences/lines.

abcdefghijklmonpqrstuvwxyz < These are not capitalized. These you use for everything else.

I wasn't trying to be mean, I was just wondering. Trust me, the internet is not where I look to boost my self-esteem. Also, it's spelled "grammar." By flood forum I mean, you're posting like twenty songs at a time. That is way too many. Way, way too many. One or two a day.

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Strummer521

That's pretty obvious. But why share stuff that you're not putting much effort into. It's inevitable, that if you don't take the time to write thoughtfully and polish your work, you'll rarely ever come up with anything worth the time it takes others to read it.

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