From Me To You

~~THERACONTEUR21~~ · 03-05-2007, 04:13 AM

So I Dont Really Know How This Goes
I Guess Were All Sitting Here. Writing I Suppose
So Since Im Writing And Hopefully Your Reading
Will You Get To Understand Me. Is It Written In Between

Are You Too Lost Along The Way? Frightened By The Shadows
Sitting In You Corner Depressed Beyond The Gallows
Is This Were You Come To Practice Your Vent
But Are They Listening Look What You Spent

Your Bleeding Your Heart, Soul, And Passion
You Scribe So Free Theres No Fear Of Fashion
Because Just Lik Me You Set In Your Corner
With No One Understanding I Could Be A Goner

But I Wont Do That You Shouldnt Either
If Were Writers Then Think, We Dont Become Weaker
Be I Neeed Reasureance Im On The Right Path
So Hit Me Up As A Friend Im Sitting At Your Lap

PaperHurricanesAndPlanes · 03-05-2007, 04:21 AM

One at a time is usually better, I'll get to this.

~~TheUsedToolguy~~ · 03-05-2007, 05:12 PM

not bad, the last line seems kind of gae

~~THERACONTEUR21~~ · 03-05-2007, 10:04 PM

well its about us sittting here what are we doing
i was trying to realte to anyone get a response some of you can only see from you perspective all of you should work on looking at other perspectives

03-05-2007, 04:13 AM	#1 (permalink)
~~THERACONTEUR21~~ Account Disabled Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: PIKEVILLE KY Posts: 39	From Me To You So I Dont Really Know How This Goes I Guess Were All Sitting Here. Writing I Suppose So Since Im Writing And Hopefully Your Reading Will You Get To Understand Me. Is It Written In Between Are You Too Lost Along The Way? Frightened By The Shadows Sitting In You Corner Depressed Beyond The Gallows Is This Were You Come To Practice Your Vent But Are They Listening Look What You Spent Your Bleeding Your Heart, Soul, And Passion You Scribe So Free Theres No Fear Of Fashion Because Just Lik Me You Set In Your Corner With No One Understanding I Could Be A Goner But I Wont Do That You Shouldnt Either If Were Writers Then Think, We Dont Become Weaker Be I Neeed Reasureance Im On The Right Path So Hit Me Up As A Friend Im Sitting At Your Lap

03-05-2007, 05:12 PM	#3 (permalink)
~~TheUsedToolguy~~ Account Disabled Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: Joplin, MO Posts: 468	not bad, the last line seems kind of gae

03-05-2007, 10:04 PM	#4 (permalink)
~~THERACONTEUR21~~ Account Disabled Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: PIKEVILLE KY Posts: 39	well its about us sittting here what are we doing i was trying to realte to anyone get a response some of you can only see from you perspective all of you should work on looking at other perspectives