socail realism (member, cover, show, quote)

~~THERACONTEUR21~~ · 03-05-2007, 03:41 AM

i wrote this wild as hell didnt remember writing it until my friend showed me
just wanted to know what someone thinks about it is itgood can you realte do you understand

social realism
Current mood: indescribable

WHAT DO YOU SEE ME AS

SOMTHING LONG THE BEATEN PATH

THATS IS PUSHED AWAY

WITH LOVELY LACK

CERTAIN WORDS DESRCIBE YOUR LIFE

CERTAIN ACTIONS DESCRIBE THE TRUTH

FOR YOUR THE ONE THAT DECIDES IT

REPRESENT THE NAKED YOUTH

THE INNER ENTITY KNOWS NO WRONG ONLY RIGHT

COMMITS LOVE AND CARE EMMITS SHINE SO BRIGHT

BUT WITH ALL TEMPTATIONS IN THIS LIFE

ALL THE HARDSHIPS, GUILT AND STRIFE

WE NEED TO STEP UP, BECOME ONE ANOTHER

FIGHT TO LOVE, SHEILD THEN COVER

I STAND ALONE ON THE WORK OF ME

DESCRIBED IN THE HEART AND MIND OF SG

BUT I KNOW HOW ITS MECHANICED

I LEARNED THE ROPES

BUT NOW I DONT PANIC

FOR THERE IS TOO MUCH I SHOW THEM

AND MORE FOR THEM TO GET TO KNOW ME

PEACE BE WITH YOU

PaperHurricanesAndPlanes · 03-05-2007, 04:21 AM

Black dot.

~~TheUsedToolguy~~ · 03-05-2007, 05:10 PM

uh, it's not too bad

sleepy jack · 03-05-2007, 09:37 PM

Quote:

MIND OF SG

SG? Also, don't post stuff in capslock.

PerFeCTioNThrUSileNCe · 03-05-2007, 09:51 PM

This is completely incoherent. I don't understand it at all......what the hell...?

ZeppelinAir · 03-05-2007, 11:37 PM

alot of the line i liked, but it was bouncing all over the place, try to orginize it better

03-05-2007, 03:41 AM	#1 (permalink)
~~THERACONTEUR21~~ Account Disabled Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: PIKEVILLE KY Posts: 39	socail realism i wrote this wild as hell didnt remember writing it until my friend showed me just wanted to know what someone thinks about it is itgood can you realte do you understand social realism Current mood: indescribable WHAT DO YOU SEE ME AS SOMTHING LONG THE BEATEN PATH THATS IS PUSHED AWAY WITH LOVELY LACK CERTAIN WORDS DESRCIBE YOUR LIFE CERTAIN ACTIONS DESCRIBE THE TRUTH FOR YOUR THE ONE THAT DECIDES IT REPRESENT THE NAKED YOUTH THE INNER ENTITY KNOWS NO WRONG ONLY RIGHT COMMITS LOVE AND CARE EMMITS SHINE SO BRIGHT BUT WITH ALL TEMPTATIONS IN THIS LIFE ALL THE HARDSHIPS, GUILT AND STRIFE WE NEED TO STEP UP, BECOME ONE ANOTHER FIGHT TO LOVE, SHEILD THEN COVER I STAND ALONE ON THE WORK OF ME DESCRIBED IN THE HEART AND MIND OF SG BUT I KNOW HOW ITS MECHANICED I LEARNED THE ROPES BUT NOW I DONT PANIC FOR THERE IS TOO MUCH I SHOW THEM AND MORE FOR THEM TO GET TO KNOW ME PEACE BE WITH YOU

03-05-2007, 11:37 PM	#6 (permalink)
ZeppelinAir Long time no see Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: somewhere in Michigan Posts: 512	alot of the line i liked, but it was bouncing all over the place, try to orginize it better __________________ not that old signature

03-05-2007, 05:10 PM	#3 (permalink)
~~TheUsedToolguy~~ Account Disabled Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: Joplin, MO Posts: 468	uh, it's not too bad