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socail realism
i wrote this wild as hell didnt remember writing it until my friend showed me
just wanted to know what someone thinks about it is itgood can you realte do you understand social realism Current mood: indescribable WHAT DO YOU SEE ME AS SOMTHING LONG THE BEATEN PATH THATS IS PUSHED AWAY WITH LOVELY LACK CERTAIN WORDS DESRCIBE YOUR LIFE CERTAIN ACTIONS DESCRIBE THE TRUTH FOR YOUR THE ONE THAT DECIDES IT REPRESENT THE NAKED YOUTH THE INNER ENTITY KNOWS NO WRONG ONLY RIGHT COMMITS LOVE AND CARE EMMITS SHINE SO BRIGHT BUT WITH ALL TEMPTATIONS IN THIS LIFE ALL THE HARDSHIPS, GUILT AND STRIFE WE NEED TO STEP UP, BECOME ONE ANOTHER FIGHT TO LOVE, SHEILD THEN COVER I STAND ALONE ON THE WORK OF ME DESCRIBED IN THE HEART AND MIND OF SG BUT I KNOW HOW ITS MECHANICED I LEARNED THE ROPES BUT NOW I DONT PANIC FOR THERE IS TOO MUCH I SHOW THEM AND MORE FOR THEM TO GET TO KNOW ME PEACE BE WITH YOU |
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uh, it's not too bad
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This is completely incoherent. I don't understand it at all......what the hell...?
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alot of the line i liked, but it was bouncing all over the place, try to orginize it better
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