socail realism
 

i wrote this wild as hell didnt remember writing it until my friend showed me
just wanted to know what someone thinks about it is itgood can you realte do you understand

social realism
Current mood: indescribable


WHAT DO YOU SEE ME AS

SOMTHING LONG THE BEATEN PATH

THATS IS PUSHED AWAY

WITH LOVELY LACK

CERTAIN WORDS DESRCIBE YOUR LIFE

CERTAIN ACTIONS DESCRIBE THE TRUTH

FOR YOUR THE ONE THAT DECIDES IT

REPRESENT THE NAKED YOUTH

THE INNER ENTITY KNOWS NO WRONG ONLY RIGHT

COMMITS LOVE AND CARE EMMITS SHINE SO BRIGHT

BUT WITH ALL TEMPTATIONS IN THIS LIFE

ALL THE HARDSHIPS, GUILT AND STRIFE

WE NEED TO STEP UP, BECOME ONE ANOTHER

FIGHT TO LOVE, SHEILD THEN COVER

I STAND ALONE ON THE WORK OF ME

DESCRIBED IN THE HEART AND MIND OF SG

BUT I KNOW HOW ITS MECHANICED

I LEARNED THE ROPES

BUT NOW I DONT PANIC

FOR THERE IS TOO MUCH I SHOW THEM

AND MORE FOR THEM TO GET TO KNOW ME



PEACE BE WITH YOU

Black dot.

uh, it's not too bad

SG? Also, don't post stuff in capslock.

This is completely incoherent. I don't understand it at all......what the hell...?

alot of the line i liked, but it was bouncing all over the place, try to orginize it better