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02-20-2007, 09:49 AM
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Dinosaurus Rex!!!
Join Date: Nov 2005
Location: Winchester, VA
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My Super Meaningful Song
Okay guys, this song means a lot to me, I wrote it when I was like 14 years old. If you don't get it, it's because you don't understand my meanings.
I am a heart of emotion And there is blood in my body. She is dead to me now I am dead to myself. Why are we dying so slowly? All I wanted was for us to live And love And grow old. But now she is gone, And I am thinking that life isn't worth living. My hands are shaking because I am so cold At the thought of losing her, But now she is gone, And I'm pulling out my hair. Life is so hard without you I wanted you to know I miss you And I will die if you don't return I will die if you don't return. Why are we dying so slowly? All I wanted was for us to live And love And grow old. But now she is gone, And I am thinking that life isn't worth living. Anymore. |
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02-20-2007, 11:47 AM
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In a very sad sad zoo
Join Date: Jan 2007
Location: "Out on tour with Smashing Pumpkins, nature kids, they don't have no function"
Posts: 363
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Is this a parody of somebody?
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02-20-2007, 12:05 PM
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They call me Tundra Boy
Join Date: Sep 2005
Location: In your linen cupboard.
Posts: 1,157
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Are you still a heart of emotion?
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02-20-2007, 10:36 PM
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Account Disabled
Join Date: Feb 2007
Location: Joplin, MO
Posts: 468
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that's pretty good, I take it as you were saying that as you get older, it becomes harder and harder to stay who u are, and stay in touch w/ your feelings. I don't find anything wrong w/ these lyrics. The only thing destructive is not giving a voice to those kind of feelings. Unfortunately, I think a lot of people do that in our society, so this means that you're really trying. Keep writing, good stuff!!
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02-22-2007, 03:32 AM
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They call me Tundra Boy
Join Date: Sep 2005
Location: In your linen cupboard.
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Please, for the emotional health of our future children, I implore you to bring out your dead.
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02-24-2007, 05:48 PM
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Account Disabled
Join Date: Feb 2007
Location: Joplin, MO
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Alright honestly, A perfect sonnet, I just said I liked this to make u feel better. Your poem sounds very suicidal, and I thought it might help u. Although, since you're obviously feeling very strong now to come in my thread and bash my awesome poem, let me say that this poem reeks of codependency, one of the saddest states that afflicts people in our society today. Codependency is one person feeling so badly about themselves that they feel they actually need another person to provide self-esteem for them, so as long as u want me to be that provider, you'll hav nothing bad to say about me,
now get back in formation. |
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02-20-2007, 03:45 PM
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Im Just As Sweet!!!:)
Join Date: Nov 2006
Location: america
Posts: 570
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I really like this.I even think this is the best song poem ive ever read that I really liked
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