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A_Perfect_Sonnet 02-20-2007 09:49 AM

My Super Meaningful Song
 
Okay guys, this song means a lot to me, I wrote it when I was like 14 years old. If you don't get it, it's because you don't understand my meanings.

I am a heart of emotion
And there is blood in my body.
She is dead to me now
I am dead to myself.

Why are we dying so slowly?
All I wanted was for us to live
And love
And grow old.
But now she is gone,
And I am thinking that life isn't worth living.

My hands are shaking because I am so cold
At the thought of losing her,
But now she is gone,
And I'm pulling out my hair.

Life is so hard without you
I wanted you to know I miss you
And I will die if you don't return
I will die if you don't return.

Why are we dying so slowly?
All I wanted was for us to live
And love
And grow old.
But now she is gone,
And I am thinking that life isn't worth living.

Anymore.

Moon Pix 02-20-2007 11:47 AM

Is this a parody of somebody?;)

DontRunMeOver 02-20-2007 12:05 PM

Are you still a heart of emotion?

PaperHurricanesAndPlanes 02-20-2007 01:41 PM

Best piece you've ever written. Lmao. Dark Circle just got OWNED.

skindredluver 02-20-2007 03:45 PM

I really like this.I even think this is the best song poem ive ever read that I really liked

Sneer 02-20-2007 05:38 PM

really good piece for a 14 year old APS

TheUsedToolguy 02-20-2007 10:36 PM

that's pretty good, I take it as you were saying that as you get older, it becomes harder and harder to stay who u are, and stay in touch w/ your feelings. I don't find anything wrong w/ these lyrics. The only thing destructive is not giving a voice to those kind of feelings. Unfortunately, I think a lot of people do that in our society, so this means that you're really trying. Keep writing, good stuff!!

A_Perfect_Sonnet 02-20-2007 11:35 PM

Satirical posts ftw.

Loser 02-21-2007 05:10 PM

One of the best if not the best song on this site hands down :)

DontRunMeOver 02-22-2007 03:32 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by TheUsedToolguy (Post 338893)
that's pretty good, I take it as you were saying that as you get older, it becomes harder and harder to stay who u are, and stay in touch w/ your feelings. I don't find anything wrong w/ these lyrics. The only thing destructive is not giving a voice to those kind of feelings. Unfortunately, I think a lot of people do that in our society, so this means that you're really trying. Keep writing, good stuff!!

I agree. There just don't seem to be enough people in society who are dead to themselves.

Please, for the emotional health of our future children, I implore you to bring out your dead.


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