My Super Meaningful Song (lyrics, quote, hands)

A_Perfect_Sonnet · 02-20-2007, 10:49 AM

Okay guys, this song means a lot to me, I wrote it when I was like 14 years old. If you don't get it, it's because you don't understand my meanings.

I am a heart of emotion
And there is blood in my body.
She is dead to me now
I am dead to myself.

Why are we dying so slowly?
All I wanted was for us to live
And love
And grow old.
But now she is gone,
And I am thinking that life isn't worth living.

My hands are shaking because I am so cold
At the thought of losing her,
But now she is gone,
And I'm pulling out my hair.

Life is so hard without you
I wanted you to know I miss you
And I will die if you don't return
I will die if you don't return.

Why are we dying so slowly?
All I wanted was for us to live
And love
And grow old.
But now she is gone,
And I am thinking that life isn't worth living.

Anymore.

Moon Pix · 02-20-2007, 12:47 PM

Is this a parody of somebody?

DontRunMeOver · 02-20-2007, 01:05 PM

Are you still a heart of emotion?

PaperHurricanesAndPlanes · 02-20-2007, 02:41 PM

Best piece you've ever written. Lmao. Dark Circle just got OWNED.

skindredluver · 02-20-2007, 04:45 PM

I really like this.I even think this is the best song poem ive ever read that I really liked

Sneer · 02-20-2007, 06:38 PM

really good piece for a 14 year old APS

~~TheUsedToolguy~~ · 02-20-2007, 11:36 PM

that's pretty good, I take it as you were saying that as you get older, it becomes harder and harder to stay who u are, and stay in touch w/ your feelings. I don't find anything wrong w/ these lyrics. The only thing destructive is not giving a voice to those kind of feelings. Unfortunately, I think a lot of people do that in our society, so this means that you're really trying. Keep writing, good stuff!!

A_Perfect_Sonnet · 02-21-2007, 12:35 AM

Satirical posts ftw.

Loser · 02-21-2007, 06:10 PM

One of the best if not the best song on this site hands down

DontRunMeOver · 02-22-2007, 04:32 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by TheUsedToolguy

that's pretty good, I take it as you were saying that as you get older, it becomes harder and harder to stay who u are, and stay in touch w/ your feelings. I don't find anything wrong w/ these lyrics. The only thing destructive is not giving a voice to those kind of feelings. Unfortunately, I think a lot of people do that in our society, so this means that you're really trying. Keep writing, good stuff!!

I agree. There just don't seem to be enough people in society who are dead to themselves.

Please, for the emotional health of our future children, I implore you to bring out your dead.

02-20-2007, 10:49 AM	#1 (permalink)
A_Perfect_Sonnet Dinosaurus Rex!!! Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: Winchester, VA Posts: 896	My Super Meaningful Song Okay guys, this song means a lot to me, I wrote it when I was like 14 years old. If you don't get it, it's because you don't understand my meanings. I am a heart of emotion And there is blood in my body. She is dead to me now I am dead to myself. Why are we dying so slowly? All I wanted was for us to live And love And grow old. But now she is gone, And I am thinking that life isn't worth living. My hands are shaking because I am so cold At the thought of losing her, But now she is gone, And I'm pulling out my hair. Life is so hard without you I wanted you to know I miss you And I will die if you don't return I will die if you don't return. Why are we dying so slowly? All I wanted was for us to live And love And grow old. But now she is gone, And I am thinking that life isn't worth living. Anymore.

02-20-2007, 12:47 PM	#2 (permalink)
Moon Pix In a very sad sad zoo Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: "Out on tour with Smashing Pumpkins, nature kids, they don't have no function" Posts: 363	Is this a parody of somebody? __________________ There’s a dream that I see, I pray it can be Look 'cross the land, shake this land - "Maybe Not", C. Marshall

02-20-2007, 04:45 PM	#5 (permalink)
skindredluver Im Just As Sweet!!!:) Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: america Posts: 570	I really like this.I even think this is the best song poem ive ever read that I really liked __________________ Let them live in the stillness and know the flame. They will loose all and give all.. Boys are like lava lamps: fun to look at but not so bright Coffee, chocolate and men, some things are just better rich

02-20-2007, 06:38 PM	#6 (permalink)
Sneer Let it drip Join Date: Nov 2004 Posts: 5,430	really good piece for a 14 year old APS __________________ LastFM Sneer's Emporium of Sound Fright Team radio show

02-20-2007, 11:36 PM	#7 (permalink)
~~TheUsedToolguy~~ Account Disabled Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: Joplin, MO Posts: 468	that's pretty good, I take it as you were saying that as you get older, it becomes harder and harder to stay who u are, and stay in touch w/ your feelings. I don't find anything wrong w/ these lyrics. The only thing destructive is not giving a voice to those kind of feelings. Unfortunately, I think a lot of people do that in our society, so this means that you're really trying. Keep writing, good stuff!!

02-21-2007, 12:35 AM	#8 (permalink)
A_Perfect_Sonnet Dinosaurus Rex!!! Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: Winchester, VA Posts: 896	Satirical posts ftw.

02-21-2007, 06:10 PM	#9 (permalink)
Loser The Professor Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: New York City Posts: 1,113	One of the best if not the best song on this site hands down