Northern Soul (title)

ZeppelinAir · 02-20-2007, 03:03 AM

i was bored so i wrote this, not sure if its anygood. it

norther soul

To feel the snow on your skin,
Chills your spine and confuses your mind,
An insane grin develops on your frozen face,
And you begin yelling at the rest of your team,
For lying on the pale white ground,
Never a motion is made among them,
But yet you continue to scream and yell,
Thought its to late they already made it to hell,
Blue from the painful cold and red from your pierced flesh,
Avalanche of terror and blizzard of insanity takes control,
Beat after beat, tick after tick your heart begins to die,
Curse god from your frozen tormented soul,
For allowing this to happen,
But it will never happen again,

The final man to fall on the north’s great cold soul.

either/or · 02-20-2007, 05:11 AM

is this about northern exposure?

right-track · 02-20-2007, 01:06 PM

Love the title.

ZeppelinAir · 02-20-2007, 02:01 PM

its basicly about being on a climb, and what someone might go through traped freezing and injure on a remote mountain with every other fellow with you is dead

02-20-2007, 03:03 AM	#1 (permalink)
ZeppelinAir Long time no see Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: somewhere in Michigan Posts: 512	Northern Soul i was bored so i wrote this, not sure if its anygood. it norther soul To feel the snow on your skin, Chills your spine and confuses your mind, An insane grin develops on your frozen face, And you begin yelling at the rest of your team, For lying on the pale white ground, Never a motion is made among them, But yet you continue to scream and yell, Thought its to late they already made it to hell, Blue from the painful cold and red from your pierced flesh, Avalanche of terror and blizzard of insanity takes control, Beat after beat, tick after tick your heart begins to die, Curse god from your frozen tormented soul, For allowing this to happen, But it will never happen again, The final man to fall on the north’s great cold soul. __________________ not that old signature

02-20-2007, 05:11 AM	#2 (permalink)
either/or Don't think twice Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: A basement on the hill Posts: 352	is this about northern exposure? __________________ Painstaking devotion and love Surrendered to self preservation From others who care for themselves A blindness that touches perfection But hurts just like anything else Isolation, isolation, isolation

02-20-2007, 02:01 PM	#4 (permalink)
ZeppelinAir Long time no see Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: somewhere in Michigan Posts: 512	its basicly about being on a climb, and what someone might go through traped freezing and injure on a remote mountain with every other fellow with you is dead __________________ not that old signature

02-20-2007, 01:06 PM	#3 (permalink)
right-track Atchin' Akai Join Date: May 2005 Location: Unamerica Posts: 8,723	Love the title.