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02-13-2007, 06:12 AM | #1 (permalink) |
Groupie
Join Date: Jan 2006
Location: Melbourne, Australia
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Magical Dream Land
This is a really weird song I wrote the other when I was extremley bored and seeing all these visions in my mind thats why its basically pointless. It has no real structure and a couple of Beatles references. Most of my friends like it and I just wanted to see what you guys think of it.
(Spoken Word) Once upon a time there was a place Far beyond where anyone had ever been before No one had seen these Magical things that were a Mystery No one had known the Peace and Love that existed here Only the lucky ever get a chance to see inside this… Magical Dream Land My mind may take myself away Into a place where my dreams I see will be a path On a journey around a Magical Dream Land Start at the gates that open this wondrous world Step on the path that will take you as far as you can go Going past I see Fandermei gardens with Grandinash trees Walk to a cliff at the end of the hill and start to fly As I’m in the multicoloured sky with the silver lined clouds I see a girl wondering ‘round looking for someone to talk with Landing safely on the pink grass, I look at her face in the sun Her eyes that are green are glowing like nothing I’ve seen before My mind may take myself away Into a place where my dreams I see will be a path On a journey around a Magical Dream Land Little creatures are running around everywhere they never stop Sharing their friendship among each other As the girl with the bright glowing eyes looks down to touch them I look up to see there are unicorns in the sky They’re floating among the shinning stars, which are lighting up Right near an ice cube I see some penguins It feels all so weird this place but nothing like this has ever been before When will the time go away? My mind may take myself away Into a place where my dreams I see will be a path On a journey around a Magical Dream Land Take a look at her while she looks at me we’re dancing in the moonshine The colours of blue and green collide Walk in the Strawberry Field holding hands and laughing in the sunshine Peace and Love may reign in our hearts Psychedelic Rainbow Kaleidoscope visions take over the sky As the rain comes down we stay outside Holding each other so close together when it’s coming down It’s a just a dream love Lips meet in the center of the park as the rain comes to a stop Then we take a seat on the grass We look up into the colourful sky where spells are cast And the fireworks of Love come fill the air My mind may take myself away Into a place where my dreams I see will be a path On a journey around a Magical Dream Land
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02-13-2007, 03:39 PM | #2 (permalink) | |
Ban Captain Caveman
Join Date: Jan 2007
Location: In The Realms of Poetry
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This reminds me of Spinal Tap, there "Stonehenge" in particular. No, that's not a good thing, considering they were mocking rock.
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