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Let it drip
Join Date: Nov 2004
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i expect criticism for this, its not my natural style but i want to broaden my approach.
You sat, stark, no remorse And I felt a tinge of panic scatter Through this weathered frame This mangled brain And still you sat, nothing, stark. A flurry of tears, dimming lights A cacophony of silence Baited breaths, snatched from the Shores of a rapid flow And still you sat, stark Numbing hate, ice cold Brazen fear, eclipsed by the Tenures of scornful eye In murky air You sit, stark, reviled. |
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