Trauma

Okay, I re-read it, it makes more sense now.
Don't turn all of your works into untitled poems about girls, that doesn't work out well.


The sketchy phrasing does suit it partially well.

And though your countenance
Isn't that of a dove
I solemnly stare
To you goes my love
?

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Sneer

Funnily enough i dont write about 'girls' very often at all. the last couple have been because my life at the moment is all about bloody girls. Thus naturally its my natural inspiration. And i dont like titling my work, to me a title narrows the possibilities and meanings of a poem, i prefer to leave it untitled and let you work it out as you read.

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