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Right Sides Creation
another poem i recently was working on, suggestions would be greatlyy valued
Right Side Creation Sleep such a deep sleep and Fall into the arms of angels and drift away in their soothing melody Carry me to a valley far away from the plain of life Between mental and physical is where it lies The right will guide you there before the waking hours My wish is for the sun never to rise and just let my soul continue to drift To float in this lake of dreams and prayers of the fallen The love and hate from the lost fly into the sky as a fine mist And fall upon me as a light drizzle that allows me to feel Everything that I have ever wanted to know Let this passion cast away as a billion fire flies To have these angels of the night illuminate the dark fields Fields of black roses and the crying willow trees To find my way back home, just let the Fire flies majestic glow guide me to my withered mortal body Only to return again another day To return when the black winged angel guides me to my after life home |
You've gotta learn some new words like for serious.
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i agree, its too simplistic
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too simple, will work on that
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