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Old 02-04-2007, 09:52 PM   #1 (permalink)
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The tone of the poem and the mood it sets are both very cliched. Lines are unoriginal with boring vocabulary and filler words presenting a majority of the concept. What really kills you is the overall mundane slump of your diction and overly simplistic syntax, rhyme scheme, and meter.
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