Confused

skindredluver · 02-04-2007, 11:34 AM

I could care less insult me as much as you want its not like im gonna cry!And crow I dont think fall out boy is emo truast me theyre not even close

swim · 02-04-2007, 11:48 AM

^he made the fob comment KL not you.

Yea emo lyrics are great.

skindredluver · 02-04-2007, 12:31 PM

Oh wasnt sure about that

A_Perfect_Sonnet · 02-04-2007, 10:52 PM

The tone of the poem and the mood it sets are both very cliched. Lines are unoriginal with boring vocabulary and filler words presenting a majority of the concept. What really kills you is the overall mundane slump of your diction and overly simplistic syntax, rhyme scheme, and meter.

02-04-2007, 11:34 AM	#21 (permalink)
skindredluver Im Just As Sweet!!!:) Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: america Posts: 570	I could care less insult me as much as you want its not like im gonna cry!And crow I dont think fall out boy is emo truast me theyre not even close __________________ Let them live in the stillness and know the flame. They will loose all and give all.. Boys are like lava lamps: fun to look at but not so bright Coffee, chocolate and men, some things are just better rich

02-04-2007, 11:48 AM	#22 (permalink)
swim dontcareaboutyou Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: North Carolina Posts: 5,188	^he made the fob comment KL not you. Yea emo lyrics are great. __________________ http://nakednaps.bandcamp.com/

02-04-2007, 12:31 PM	#23 (permalink)
skindredluver Im Just As Sweet!!!:) Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: america Posts: 570	Oh wasnt sure about that __________________ Let them live in the stillness and know the flame. They will loose all and give all.. Boys are like lava lamps: fun to look at but not so bright Coffee, chocolate and men, some things are just better rich

02-04-2007, 10:52 PM	#24 (permalink)
A_Perfect_Sonnet Dinosaurus Rex!!! Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: Winchester, VA Posts: 896	The tone of the poem and the mood it sets are both very cliched. Lines are unoriginal with boring vocabulary and filler words presenting a majority of the concept. What really kills you is the overall mundane slump of your diction and overly simplistic syntax, rhyme scheme, and meter.