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skindredluver 02-04-2007 10:34 AM

I could care less insult me as much as you want its not like im gonna cry!And crow I dont think fall out boy is emo truast me theyre not even close

swim 02-04-2007 10:48 AM

^he made the fob comment KL not you.


Yea emo lyrics are great.

skindredluver 02-04-2007 11:31 AM

Oh wasnt sure about that

A_Perfect_Sonnet 02-04-2007 09:52 PM

The tone of the poem and the mood it sets are both very cliched. Lines are unoriginal with boring vocabulary and filler words presenting a majority of the concept. What really kills you is the overall mundane slump of your diction and overly simplistic syntax, rhyme scheme, and meter.


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