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Old 01-30-2007, 03:48 PM   #1 (permalink)
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(Verse 1)
Tell her I’ve been waiting for her
And that I’ve been waiting long
The clouds are gathering strong
The rain will come along

She can take her sweet time
Cus she means the world to me
She’s faultless in her actions
And the entire world has to see

(Chorus Ver. 1)
That’s she the girl for me
She’s the one for me
I love her through her skin and her bones
Oh she’s the one for me

(Verse 2)
I’m playing with my bracelets
And looking in the sky
The birds are forming formations
Nature is alive

I read about this girl,
Who sat at work alone
She needed to get out of her shell
And now she’s coming home

(Chorus Ver. 2)
Oh she’s the girl for me
Yeah she’s the one for me
I love her through her skin and her bones
Oh she’s the one for me

(Verse 3)
She plays with her hair
And I look into her eyes
The biting of the bottom lip
And this comes to my surprise

She tells me that she loves me
She tells me that she cares
I know that I’m a sucker for love
But it’s my love that she shares

(Chorus Ver. 2) x2
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Old 01-30-2007, 04:52 PM   #2 (permalink)
Im Just As Sweet!!!:)
 
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Are you in a band?And its cool but coulda been better!No offense
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Old 01-30-2007, 05:24 PM   #3 (permalink)
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In a band, but this is a solo song I'm doing. It's only my second attempt at a song.
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Old 01-30-2007, 05:27 PM   #4 (permalink)
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I do like it though and thats cool!
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Old 01-30-2007, 05:54 PM   #5 (permalink)
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its not to bad, i like it a bit
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