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Old 01-29-2007, 05:27 PM   #1 (permalink)
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The shining ground blinds my eyes
With the sun blocked by the mountain of ice
A beautiful prism masks the sky around me
Mesmerized from the lights of north
Not hearing the cries of the sky
Warning me of the doom to face
The doom of the white bear
The great white bear claims all in its wake
With teeth and claws of ice
It rips apart my eyes and freezes my face
This is last thing I will ever know
The blinding light from the endless snow
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Old 01-29-2007, 05:41 PM   #2 (permalink)
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OmG that was so cool!It makes me wanna cry!jk
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Old 01-29-2007, 05:44 PM   #3 (permalink)
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You know, you've really improved from the earlier stuff you posted. This is pretty good.
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Old 01-30-2007, 12:40 PM   #4 (permalink)
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thanks, guess it helps when im completely focused
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Old 01-30-2007, 12:54 PM   #5 (permalink)
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I agree with Ethan, my imagination went wild on this one. Nice job!
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