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Old 01-18-2007, 06:57 PM   #1 (permalink)
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For anyone whos interested, i think it would be cool to create a poem that everyoner can contribute to, so if everyone adds a line of roughly 10 syllables onto the overall poem, and we'll see how it goes. Rhyming structures and themes can be divulged as it develops.

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. Please write your line in bold so as it can be deciphered from anything else you say (preferrable nothing)
. Keep all lines together, so basically cut and paste the materail left before you and add your line on.

First line,

Drenched in the tears of a winters morning
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Old 01-18-2007, 09:27 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Old 01-18-2007, 09:32 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Old 01-19-2007, 03:17 AM   #4 (permalink)
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Drenched in the tears of a winters morning,
From the fear of the winters night,
Looking at the pristine snow outside,
but blinded by its heavenly glow,
holy **** that's a lot of blow.
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Drenched in the tears of a winters morning,
From the fear of the winters night,
Looking at the pristine snow outside,
but blinded by its heavenly glow,
holy **** that's a lot of blow.
I say as I suck off my lovely hoe,
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From the fear of the winters night,
Looking at the pristine snow outside,
but blinded by its heavenly glow,
holy **** that's a lot of blow.
I say as I suck off my lovely hoe,
my fist says hello to my greatest foe
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Drenched in the tears of a winters morning,
From the fear of the winters night,
Looking at the pristine snow outside,
but blinded by its heavenly glow,
holy **** that's a lot of blow.
I say as I suck off my lovely hoe,
my fist says hello to my greatest foe,
as my b*tch gets to her knees on the flo'
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Your toughest competitor lives in your head. Some days his name is fear, or pain, or gravity. Stomp his ass.

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Drenched in the tears of a winters morning,
From the fear of the winters night,
Looking at the pristine snow outside,
but blinded by its heavenly glow,
holy **** that's a lot of blow.
I say as I suck off my lovely hoe,
my fist says hello to my greatest foe,
as my b*tch gets to her knees on the flo'
And in the dawns light she plays with me so
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Drenched in the tears of a winters morning,
From the fear of the winters night,
Looking at the pristine snow outside,
but blinded by its heavenly glow,
holy **** that's a lot of blow.
I say as I suck off my lovely hoe,
my fist says hello to my greatest foe,
as my b*tch gets to her knees on the flo'
And in the dawns light she plays with me so,
I guess I'll have to pay her some dough
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