An Idea (not a song)
 

For anyone whos interested, i think it would be cool to create a poem that everyoner can contribute to, so if everyone adds a line of roughly 10 syllables onto the overall poem, and we'll see how it goes. Rhyming structures and themes can be divulged as it develops.

So,


. Please write your line in bold so as it can be deciphered from anything else you say (preferrable nothing)
. Keep all lines together, so basically cut and paste the materail left before you and add your line on.

First line,

Drenched in the tears of a winters morning

Drenched in the tears of a winters morning,
From the fear of the winters night,
Looking at the pristine snow outside,

Drenched in the tears of a winters morning,
From the fear of the winters night,
Looking at the pristine snow outside,
but blinded by its heavenly glow,

Drenched in the tears of a winters morning,
From the fear of the winters night,
Looking at the pristine snow outside,
but blinded by its heavenly glow,
holy **** that's a lot of blow.

Drenched in the tears of a winters morning,
From the fear of the winters night,
Looking at the pristine snow outside,
but blinded by its heavenly glow,
holy **** that's a lot of blow.
I say as I suck off my lovely hoe,

Drenched in the tears of a winters morning,
From the fear of the winters night,
Looking at the pristine snow outside,
but blinded by its heavenly glow,
holy **** that's a lot of blow.
I say as I suck off my lovely hoe,
my fist says hello to my greatest foe

Drenched in the tears of a winters morning,
From the fear of the winters night,
Looking at the pristine snow outside,
but blinded by its heavenly glow,
holy **** that's a lot of blow.
I say as I suck off my lovely hoe,
my fist says hello to my greatest foe,
as my b*tch gets to her knees on the flo'

Drenched in the tears of a winters morning,
From the fear of the winters night,
Looking at the pristine snow outside,
but blinded by its heavenly glow,
holy **** that's a lot of blow.
I say as I suck off my lovely hoe,
my fist says hello to my greatest foe,
as my b*tch gets to her knees on the flo'
And in the dawns light she plays with me so

Drenched in the tears of a winters morning,
From the fear of the winters night,
Looking at the pristine snow outside,
but blinded by its heavenly glow,
holy **** that's a lot of blow.
I say as I suck off my lovely hoe,
my fist says hello to my greatest foe,
as my b*tch gets to her knees on the flo'
And in the dawns light she plays with me so,
I guess I'll have to pay her some dough

Drenched in the tears of a winters morning,
From the fear of the winters night,
Looking at the pristine snow outside,
but blinded by its heavenly glow,
holy **** that's a lot of blow.
I say as I suck off my lovely hoe,
my fist says hello to my greatest foe,
as my b*tch gets to her knees on the flo'
And in the dawns light she plays with me so,
I guess I'll have to pay her some dough
Moving my roses thorns to and fro

Drenched in the tears of a winters morning,
From the fear of the winters night,
Looking at the pristine snow outside,
but blinded by its heavenly glow,
holy **** that's a lot of blow.
I say as I suck off my lovely hoe,
my fist says hello to my greatest foe,
as my b*tch gets to her knees on the flo'
And in the dawns light she plays with me so,
I guess I'll have to pay her some dough
Moving my roses thorns to and fro.
As our lovely rose bush wilts, I leave

Drenched in the tears of a winters morning,
From the fear of the winters night,
Looking at the pristine snow outside,
but blinded by its heavenly glow,
holy **** that's a lot of blow.
I say as I suck off my lovely hoe,
my fist says hello to my greatest foe,
as my b*tch gets to her knees on the flo'
And in the dawns light she plays with me so,
I guess I'll have to pay her some dough
Moving my roses thorns to and fro.
As our lovely rose bush wilts, I leave
Tears flowing from my eyes, sand through a sieve

Drenched in the tears of a winters morning,
From the fear of the winters night,
Looking at the pristine snow outside,
but blinded by its heavenly glow,
holy **** that's a lot of blow.
I say as I suck off my lovely hoe,
my fist says hello to my greatest foe,
as my b*tch gets to her knees on the flo'
And in the dawns light she plays with me so,
I guess I'll have to pay her some dough
Moving my roses thorns to and fro.
As our lovely rose bush wilts, I leave
Tears flowing from my eyes, sand through a sieve
Oh we have fallen apart, a dead leaf

Drenched in the tears of a winters morning,
From the fear of the winters night,
Looking at the pristine snow outside,
but blinded by its heavenly glow,
holy **** that's a lot of blow.
I say as I suck off my lovely hoe,
my fist says hello to my greatest foe,
as my b*tch gets to her knees on the flo'
And in the dawns light she plays with me so,
I guess I'll have to pay her some dough
Moving my roses thorns to and fro.
As our lovely rose bush wilts, I leave
Tears flowing from my eyes, sand through a sieve
Oh we have fallen apart, a dead leaf
Nothing more then a rusting colored reef,

Drenched in the tears of a winters morning,
From the fear of the winters night,
Looking at the pristine snow outside,
but blinded by its heavenly glow,
holy **** that's a lot of blow.
I say as I suck off my lovely hoe,
my fist says hello to my greatest foe,
as my b*tch gets to her knees on the flo'
And in the dawns light she plays with me so,
I guess I'll have to pay her some dough
Moving my roses thorns to and fro.
As our lovely rose bush wilts, I leave
Tears flowing from my eyes, sand through a sieve
Oh we have fallen apart, a dead leaf
Nothing more then a rusting colored reef,
Our cadavers sinking into the deep,

Drenched in the tears of a winters morning,
From the fear of the winters night,
Looking at the pristine snow outside,
but blinded by its heavenly glow,
holy **** that's a lot of blow.
I say as I suck off my lovely hoe,
my fist says hello to my greatest foe,
as my b*tch gets to her knees on the flo'
And in the dawns light she plays with me so,
I guess I'll have to pay her some dough
Moving my roses thorns to and fro.
As our lovely rose bush wilts, I leave
Tears flowing from my eyes, sand through a sieve
Oh we have fallen apart, a dead leaf
Nothing more then a rusting colored reef,
Our cadavers sinking into the deep,
Because she's in rohypnol induced sleep

Drenched in the tears of a winters morning,
From the fear of the winters night,
Looking at the pristine snow outside,
but blinded by its heavenly glow,
holy **** that's a lot of blow.
I say as I suck off my lovely hoe,
my fist says hello to my greatest foe,
as my b*tch gets to her knees on the flo'
And in the dawns light she plays with me so,
I guess I'll have to pay her some dough
Moving my roses thorns to and fro.
As our lovely rose bush wilts, I leave
Tears flowing from my eyes, sand through a sieve
Oh we have fallen apart, a dead leaf
Nothing more then a rusting colored reef,
Our cadavers sinking into the deep,
Because she's in rohypnol induced sleep
Into her, my juices poor, my penis weeps,

Drenched in the tears of a winters morning,
From the fear of the winters night,
Looking at the pristine snow outside,
but blinded by its heavenly glow,
holy **** that's a lot of blow.
I say as I suck off my lovely hoe,
my fist says hello to my greatest foe,
as my b*tch gets to her knees on the flo'
And in the dawns light she plays with me so,
I guess I'll have to pay her some dough
Moving my roses thorns to and fro.
As our lovely rose bush wilts, I leave
Tears flowing from my eyes, sand through a sieve
Oh we have fallen apart, a dead leaf
Nothing more then a rusting colored reef,
Our cadavers sinking into the deep,
Because she's in rohypnol induced sleep
Into her, my juices poor, my penis weeps,
Planting my seeds waiting for trophies to reap,

Drenched in the tears of a winters morning,
From the fear of the winters night,
Looking at the pristine snow outside,
but blinded by its heavenly glow,
holy **** that's a lot of blow.
I say as I suck off my lovely hoe,
my fist says hello to my greatest foe,
as my b*tch gets to her knees on the flo'
And in the dawns light she plays with me so,
I guess I'll have to pay her some dough
Moving my roses thorns to and fro.
As our lovely rose bush wilts, I leave
Tears flowing from my eyes, sand through a sieve
Oh we have fallen apart, a dead leaf
Nothing more then a rusting colored reef,
Our cadavers sinking into the deep,
Because she's in rohypnol induced sleep
Into her, my juices poor, my penis weeps,
Planting my seeds waiting for trophies to reap,
My woman, months later swells like a melon,

Drenched in the tears of a winters morning,
From the fear of the winters night,
Looking at the pristine snow outside,
but blinded by its heavenly glow,
holy **** that's a lot of blow.
I say as I suck off my lovely hoe,
my fist says hello to my greatest foe,
as my b*tch gets to her knees on the flo'
And in the dawns light she plays with me so,
I guess I'll have to pay her some dough
Moving my roses thorns to and fro.
As our lovely rose bush wilts, I leave
Tears flowing from my eyes, sand through a sieve
Oh we have fallen apart, a dead leaf
Nothing more then a rusting colored reef,
Our cadavers sinking into the deep,
Because she's in rohypnol induced sleep
Into her, my juices poor, my penis weeps,
Planting my seeds waiting for trophies to reap,
My woman, months later swells like a melon,
But it's fine, abortion is a nice invention

Drenched in the tears of a winters morning,
From the fear of the winters night,
Looking at the pristine snow outside,
but blinded by its heavenly glow,
holy **** that's a lot of blow.
I say as I suck off my lovely hoe,
my fist says hello to my greatest foe,
as my b*tch gets to her knees on the flo'
And in the dawns light she plays with me so,
I guess I'll have to pay her some dough
Moving my roses thorns to and fro.
As our lovely rose bush wilts, I leave
Tears flowing from my eyes, sand through a sieve
Oh we have fallen apart, a dead leaf
Nothing more then a rusting colored reef,
Our cadavers sinking into the deep,
Because she's in rohypnol induced sleep
Into her, my juices poor, my penis weeps,
Planting my seeds waiting for trophies to reap,
My woman, months later swells like a melon,
But it's fine, abortion is a nice invention
Ill kick her tummy, and remember protection

Drenched in the tears of a winters morning,
From the fear of the winters night,
Looking at the pristine snow outside,
but blinded by its heavenly glow,
holy **** that's a lot of blow.
I say as I suck off my lovely hoe,
my fist says hello to my greatest foe,
as my b*tch gets to her knees on the flo'
And in the dawns light she plays with me so,
I guess I'll have to pay her some dough
Moving my roses thorns to and fro.
As our lovely rose bush wilts, I leave
Tears flowing from my eyes, sand through a sieve
Oh we have fallen apart, a dead leaf
Nothing more then a rusting colored reef,
Our cadavers sinking into the deep,
Because she's in rohypnol induced sleep
Into her, my juices poor, my penis weeps,
Planting my seeds waiting for trophies to reap,
My woman, months later swells like a melon,
But it's fine, abortion is a nice invention
Ill kick her tummy, and remember protection,
Because she left me with a recurring infection

Drenched in the tears of a winters morning,
From the fear of the winters night,
Looking at the pristine snow outside,
but blinded by its heavenly glow,
holy **** that's a lot of blow.
I say as I suck off my lovely hoe,
my fist says hello to my greatest foe,
as my b*tch gets to her knees on the flo'
And in the dawns light she plays with me so,
I guess I'll have to pay her some dough
Moving my roses thorns to and fro.
As our lovely rose bush wilts, I leave
Tears flowing from my eyes, sand through a sieve
Oh we have fallen apart, a dead leaf
Nothing more then a rusting colored reef,
Our cadavers sinking into the deep,
Because she's in rohypnol induced sleep
Into her, my juices poor, my penis weeps,
Planting my seeds waiting for trophies to reap,
My woman, months later swells like a melon,
But it's fine, abortion is a nice invention
Ill kick her tummy, and remember protection,
Because she left me with a recurring infection
But i'm not bitter, I love a green erection,