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01-18-2007, 07:52 AM | #1 (permalink) |
Let it drip
Join Date: Nov 2004
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Is blood thicker?
i know its cliche and over emotional, but it was written on an emotional subject.
The lights they shine outside / yet it’s in the dark we hide. the beacons lit for sake of hope / were burnt out lonng ago Yes the dark is our reprieve /as we struggle through the sinews of a mind besieged by ignorance / a maladaptive will to sin / a will devoid of discipline / a will deprived of pride Well I’m sure, your nights, feel longer And I know, those thoughts, still linger But this rage inside, grows stronger And to you I say is blood really thicker? I understand your plight / yet I fail to sympathize / when there’s no hint of fight / no tug of war / the rope is worn and slack. They say forgiveness is a strength / yet I’m unforgivably weak / yes you’re a victim of the circumstance / tricked into the devils dance / bludgeoned by a darkened past / Yet pity’s something I can’t hide Well I’m sure, your nights, feel longer And I know, those thoughts, still linger But this rage inside, grows stronger And to you I say is blood really thicker? |
01-18-2007, 09:33 PM | #6 (permalink) |
snickers
Join Date: Mar 2005
Location: detroit
Posts: 2,194
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I like it, the lyrics were quite good.
The only thing I would say needed some attention was the replacement of backslashes for phrases.
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